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WORKSHOP POEM LIFE WITH ITS OBSTACLES

LIFE WITH ITS OBSTACLES

It does become hard
It does has its obstacles
It will tackle you down
There will be challenges
There will be a big dark cloud
There will be big mountain standing in front of you
You won't believe that you will pass through
When hard times strikes over

Step intpo your inner strength
Know who you are
Remember where you come from
Reminisce of where you are going
Remember you'r ambition
Remember your mission and vision you set up for life

All hard times come and go
Nothing last forever either its happiness nor sadness
They both have to happen in your life,so that your future can be fiminine and stable
They are there to make you strong person and build concrete fundation of your future
When hard times strikes be happy and enjoy every moment of that 
Smile at the confusion and never ask why me 
Say thanks GOD I came across this, this is an awesome experience ever

When hard times strikes 
Laugh, Sing, scream, cry 
Never forget who you are
Never give up
You have to fall,then rise 
Nobody said this life is a smooth route with no pot holes and mountains
Know who you are, believe in yourself, love yourself...
Then hard times will fade

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/9/2015 11:48:00 PM
Emma, :) congrats on your workshop poem
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Date: 5/15/2015 8:07:00 PM
Hi Emma.. powerful, well constructed write, my friend. Welcome to Poetry Soup, a great place to display your creative, artist works. It's also an ideal place to meet and be shaped by other poets. Comment on their works and they will comment on yours. Give any of the varied contest a try as well. I look forward to reading more good writes this month! Please take time to check me out, ok... PS.. If you have any questions about the Soup feel free to ask, just send me a Soup Mail. Talk soon!
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Date: 5/13/2015 11:53:00 AM
One last thought. Thank you for the uplifting ending message. Have a nice day. :) SKAT
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Date: 5/13/2015 11:51:00 AM
Hello Emma, when I first join the soup. The person who helped create my account, posted all my first poems in upper case lettering. I had no idea, what I was doing. However, your poem is great. Life is a mission, sometimes we have to cross mountains and drown in rivers before we even face the real challenges. Accepting and having faith is how I get by. Thank you for sharing your poem and thoughts. SKAT
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EMMA PALESA MOHANOE
Date: 5/14/2015 3:20:00 AM
Hi Skat A can you please help me correct my mistakes and post my poem with upper and lower case, if possible
Date: 5/12/2015 7:00:00 AM
I love the poem, especially these two lines: WHEN HARD TIMES STRICKS LAUGH, SING, SCREAM, CRY This is a good therapy for the soul.
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Date: 5/11/2015 8:31:00 AM
Sweet expressions from wonderful lines which are so liberal to disallow the message stay hidden. I love this poem and it is definitely a 7
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