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Workshop Poem Life With Its Obstacles

LIFE WITH ITS OBSTACLES It does become hard It does has its obstacles It will tackle you down There will be challenges There will be a big dark cloud There will be big mountain standing in front of you You won't believe that you will pass through When hard times strikes over Step intpo your inner strength Know who you are Remember where you come from Reminisce of where you are going Remember you'r ambition Remember your mission and vision you set up for life All hard times come and go Nothing last forever either its happiness nor sadness They both have to happen in your life,so that your future can be fiminine and stable They are there to make you strong person and build concrete fundation of your future When hard times strikes be happy and enjoy every moment of that Smile at the confusion and never ask why me Say thanks GOD I came across this, this is an awesome experience ever When hard times strikes Laugh, Sing, scream, cry Never forget who you are Never give up You have to fall,then rise Nobody said this life is a smooth route with no pot holes and mountains Know who you are, believe in yourself, love yourself... Then hard times will fade

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Date: 6/9/2015 11:48:00 PM
Emma, :) congrats on your workshop poem
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Date: 5/13/2015 11:53:00 AM
One last thought. Thank you for the uplifting ending message. Have a nice day. :) SKAT
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Date: 5/13/2015 11:51:00 AM
Hello Emma, when I first join the soup. The person who helped create my account, posted all my first poems in upper case lettering. I had no idea, what I was doing. However, your poem is great. Life is a mission, sometimes we have to cross mountains and drown in rivers before we even face the real challenges. Accepting and having faith is how I get by. Thank you for sharing your poem and thoughts. SKAT
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Emma Palesa Mohanoe
Date: 5/14/2015 3:20:00 AM
Hi Skat A can you please help me correct my mistakes and post my poem with upper and lower case, if possible
Date: 5/12/2015 7:00:00 AM
I love the poem, especially these two lines: WHEN HARD TIMES STRICKS LAUGH, SING, SCREAM, CRY This is a good therapy for the soul.
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Date: 5/11/2015 8:31:00 AM
Sweet expressions from wonderful lines which are so liberal to disallow the message stay hidden. I love this poem and it is definitely a 7
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