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Words of Love

She reached her hand across their marriage bed, It’d been a stand-off for so many years; She prayed their love had not grown cold and dead, His answer could allay her deepest fear: The love for him she held in unshed tears. Afraid that they had lost the life they shared, A life of which he once had spoke with cheer: She prayed he’d speak those words to prove he cared. He turned to her as though to speak, instead He turned away to face the wall most near, Her hand still out, the tears so long unshed Fell from her eyes, uncertainty made clear: The hope that lay inside now faded here. Her heart was pierced, her need for him was bared, She felt the pain as knives, so sharp and sheer; She prayed he’d speak those words to prove he cared. For love to bloom, then know it must be fed And heed these words, your heart upon them wear, For marriage needs much more than daily bread, Think not that words of love are not held dear, For hearts will break when words to silence veer. She lay upon her marriage, boned and pared, She prayed he’d speak the words she longed to hear; Although she now knew that he did not care. Submitted March 24, 2019 Strength Through Adversity Poetry Contest Sponsored by Gregory R. Barden [I wrote this poem in 2010 during a time of extreme emotional turmoil in my personal life. This is a reflection of how uncertain fear blossomed into certain awareness which lead to acceptance and the courage to change.]

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Date: 2/28/2011 5:54:00 PM
Been there done that got the divorce grrrrrr sorry...sorry for both of us! Congrad's on your write. Light & Love
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Date: 2/28/2011 11:18:00 AM
Congratulations Deb on a very fine poem. I kept coming back to this one. Great job. Soup Loe, Joyce
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Date: 2/28/2011 10:48:00 AM
Congrats on a well deserved win, Deb. Nice going. Luv Ralph
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Date: 2/28/2011 10:27:00 AM
A big congratulations on your win Deb. I also believe it is one of your best poems. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/28/2011 9:11:00 AM
What a very sad write on marriage yet wonderfully written that leaves an impact to the reader! Super congrats on your wonderful win, Deb! :)
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Date: 2/28/2011 6:36:00 AM
Not easy to write about this subject with grace..you did..congrats on your big win. BG
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Date: 2/28/2011 6:28:00 AM
Congrats Deb on your awesome win in Joyce's contest with this unique write my friend.. so happy to be sharing the winners circle with one of the best luv..
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Date: 2/28/2011 4:39:00 AM
congrats on your 2nd place win with this beautiful and poignant ballade, alas all too true in many cases...
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Date: 2/28/2011 4:32:00 AM
a gem of a piece , deb... thumbs up for the win.. :) huggs,nette
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Date: 2/27/2011 11:12:00 PM
Hey congratulations, Deb, on your BIG win in lovely Joyce's contest. This is a great topic to do a poem on. I once did one like this but in free verse. You really approached it well! I'm glad to see you scored high with it. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 2/27/2011 10:54:00 PM
Congratulations on winning with this fine entry in Joyce's contest, Deb. I knew you would do it.
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Date: 1/4/2011 12:56:00 PM
Emotion filled poetry Deb....:)
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Date: 12/29/2010 8:23:00 AM
A few words to let you know I have read your poetry today and enjoyed it Deb. I hope to read many more of your poems in 2011. Wishing you a New Year filled with good health , love, and amazing inspiration. May your writing endeavors become all that you have wished for. HAPPY NEW YEAR. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/28/2010 3:13:00 PM
Burgeoning love in a scintillating rhapsody! Enjoyed your heart throbbing, escalating verse!
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Date: 12/28/2010 3:09:00 PM
wonderful poem, really enjoyed it and it said so much to me, thank you.
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Date: 12/28/2010 3:08:00 PM
Strong write Deb.. true Poetry you have shared here... your heart shines in this one. well written..luv Michael
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Date: 12/28/2010 2:48:00 PM
Awesome, Deb. Great emotion in this one. It reminds me of the theme I used too last week in my poem A Long Suffering Wife. Did you see that one? Like we were on the same wave length! well, time for me to finally get off here. LUv, Andrea
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