Notes About The Poem

Words Left Unsaid

I was happy in a dysfunctional relationship
Never wanted to leave this man
Who put me down and made me feel
Like I was just a little crazy
Or maybe – a lot crazy

We had something special even though it hurt
The way we tortured one another with love
That should have been faithful and true
But was really adulterous and shrewd

I was happy with my place as a wife
To the man who I loved despite
Drunken moments of deception
And dreaded pain of rejection
He was my love

And oh, how I loved this man
He held the world in his hand
I married him young, just seventeen
And discovered that he could move the earth

It didn’t matter that he wasn’t perfect
In my heart, I saw him as flawless
He looked like a classic Marine
Or a highway patrolman
He would have fit the uniform 

It was love, though, that made him so special
It wasn’t that he sang me love songs
Or made me feels so blessed
With gifts of acceptance

It wasn’t that the bad outweighed the best
Feelings that were hurt beyond grief that lasts
When we parted there was everything left
To say and yet we said – nothing.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Dietrich Avatar
October 6, 2019 at 8:38 PM
wow, you were so young . I could not have loved this kind of man. It's good that you got out of it. Your love had to be amazing to endure as long as you did.
Mcintosh Avatar
October 6, 2019 at 8:40 PM
We were both too young and dumb... that was the worst part really... we were childish :) Thanks Andrea for commenting and always stopping by... I appreciate your kind words. God bless you and keep you, With love, Gina
One Avatar
October 6, 2019 at 11:00 AM
I've written a few poems on this subject...I think one was called you don't get a chance to say goodbye and words left unspoken..
Mcintosh Avatar
October 6, 2019 at 8:39 PM
I'll go read them :) Thanks tons SO... Love and prayers to you
One Avatar
October 6, 2019 at 7:44 AM
happens so many times, life is a balance of holding on and letting go.... deep and emotive... many will relate with you..
Mcintosh Avatar
October 6, 2019 at 8:14 AM
Yes. You seem to always speak "deep" truths and I so appreciate that. God bless you with much love and many prayers, Gina
Adams Avatar
October 5, 2019 at 11:01 PM
I have stood on that same threshold, so i can relate to your poem...great penning Gina....it speaks through the words left unspoken! Love your courage, Blessings and Hugs :)
Mcintosh Avatar
October 5, 2019 at 11:08 PM
Thanks for your understanding and commenting. This is really a distant memory, but is a part of me for sure. I love you and your courage too...You're a true friend and blessing to me, God bless you and hugs, Gina
There Avatar
October 5, 2019 at 9:15 PM
At that point, a relationship is almost beyond words, I think. And what good would they do, because he would never say anything you need to hear, anything that might help mend your broken pieces... A very revealing and vulnerable write, Gina ~ thank you for sharing <3
Mcintosh Avatar
October 5, 2019 at 9:18 PM
Thanks Hello There... It is rough to go through, but relationships like this do make you stronger in the long run. I do pray for him and forgive him for it all. Love and prayers, Gina
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