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Words Are Better Left Unsaid

Sweetheart, sometimes words are better left unsaid, almost is never enough when you break free. Every day I starved for you, you left instead, but I knew better to let your hands on me. Almost is never enough when you break free, you’ll never know that I was your best mistake. But I knew better to let your hands on me, why try to mend wounds when they’re ready to break. You’ll never know that I was your best mistake, all those bad decisions left your soul greedy. Why try to mend wounds when they’re ready to break, a dangerous woman is how you see me. All those bad decisions left your soul greedy, baby I guess you don’t know me after all. A dangerous woman is how you see me, though I am someone to catch you when you fall. Baby I guess you don’t know me after all, maybe I’m the one that was too into you, though I am someone to catch you when you fall, didn’t we just stroll down honeymoon avenue? Maybe I’m the one that was too into you, I may act like I didn’t, but I knew better. Didn’t we just stroll down honeymoon avenue? Our great moments that I’ll always remember. I may act like I didn't, but I knew better, the problem is every day the moonlight shows our great moments that I’ll always remember. Just a little bit of your heart always glows. The problem is every day the moonlight shows the way you used to hunger for my embrace. Just a little bit of your heart always glows, I remember your voice would resound with grace. The way you used to hunger for my embrace, every day I starved for you, you left instead. I remember your voice would resound with grace, sweetheart, sometimes words are better left unsaid. I chose Ariana Grande 1.) Into you 2.) Break free 3.) Problem 4.) Everyday 5.) Dangerous woman 6.) Bad decisions 7.) Best mistake 8.) Moonlight 9.) Knew better 10.) Baby I 11.) Greedy 12.) Almost is never enough 13.) Sometimes 14.) The way 15.) Why try 16.) Honeymoon avenue 17.) Just a little bit of your heart 18.) You’ll never know 19.) You don’t know me 20.) I don’t care 21.) Hands on me 22.) Better left unsaid 11 syllables in each line howmanysyllables.com Music Pantoum Contest Silent One April 4, 2018

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Date: 5/30/2018 2:23:00 PM
Great job weaving those song titles into this difficult Pantoum form, Laura! Congrats on your First Place win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/28/2018 3:06:00 AM
Congratulations, Laura on your fine win. An amazing poem with so may titles.
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Date: 5/27/2018 4:26:00 PM
Awesome creative verse, Laura, congratulations on your Pantoum win... Hugs Eve
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Date: 5/25/2018 5:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Laura, absolutely amazing how you managed to incorporate 22 titles into this beautifully written pantoum, just brilliant. :))
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Date: 5/24/2018 9:06:00 PM
Congratulations on your excellent win, Laura, with your beautifully expressive pantoum. The song titles flow ever so gracefully through you lovely poetic lines. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 5/24/2018 1:59:00 PM
Congrats on your top placement with Ariana, Well Done xxoo
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Date: 5/24/2018 1:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win!! Well done.
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Date: 5/24/2018 1:39:00 PM
- Congratulations on your wonderful 1st place in the competition, a great music choice Laura :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/24/2018 12:49:00 PM
Hi Laura, I like Ariana Grande. She has a good voice. Did you know she is a female impersonator? She does a good impersonation of Celine Dion. Excellent Pantoum. Congratulations on your 1st place win in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 5/24/2018 11:54:00 AM
This is such a beautiful poem and you used so many titles.. I do like Ariana, but I have not heard some of these songs.. Your poem is just fantastic... Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Date: 4/6/2018 10:48:00 AM
Yet another wonderful pantoum for Silent's contest. Good luck Laura.
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Date: 4/4/2018 2:48:00 PM
darn striking, winning piece with a touch of warmth and nostalgia, lady lou!...huggs
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Date: 4/4/2018 1:13:00 PM
- Music I'm not so familiar with, Laura - But a wonderful poem :) - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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