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I cling to reveries of hours, the ardent Reflections from flowering summer’s root, That in my journal moment, the crimson skies Are aglow with tulips long as floodlights: Then I burn phrases the way one does in A flamed trance swerving in pure daze beneath Night's crescent moon...a blur of penciled observations Whirling like a blazed feather that on the river Of late duskfall, I would still tumble on a hay, When syllables grow along racy tunes-- Flinging jubilant, morose incidences from life's notes. Oh, radiant stars could not help But drown my hands in raw and intense lines which bury my eyes deep in verses’ fanned: I'm loathe to leave my untamed story as Twilight fades...etches drip and clouds huddle blown paper sailing like inked, bloodied onionskin . Written 10/5/2018 for Caren Krutsinger _____________ Playing With Words Under Fire Contest

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Paul Callus

Date: 10/7/2018 1:36:00 PM

Absolutely beautiful, Nette! You engulf the reader in flames of poetic delight. I bow to your magical pen. Congratulations on a most worthy win. Hugs // paul

Line Gauthier

Date: 10/6/2018 1:30:00 PM

Beautiful, nette. Congrats on your well deserved win.

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 10/6/2018 2:15:00 AM

Beautifully penned and so full of passion. I share your dream with 'tulips as long as floodlights. Wonderful.

Frederic Parker

Date: 10/5/2018 6:05:00 PM

your pen is mightier than a sword dear poet, my kingdom for a phrase, to let dance the lingering thoughts once burned away cast into the winds of tomorrow's poem...you dear lady...are a poet...

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/5/2018 3:39:00 PM

Back to congratulate you on your third placement Nette! I knew I would see it in the winner's circle. : )

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/5/2018 2:00:00 PM

Nette, the imagery in this poem was so profoundly beautiful, I am so glad that you wrote it for my contest. I feel honored at the greatness you gave to this gorgeous poem!

Matthew Anish

Date: 10/4/2018 10:11:00 PM

What powerful verse here! Shows your love of the written word! A nice photo with it, too. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Duke Beaufort

Date: 10/4/2018 8:10:00 PM

I get the impression you like to write!! I am smiling at this one. You are a very pleasant breeze in the airspace. A glow in the pond. A pulsar in the universe!! Thanks for your comment.

Silent One

Date: 10/4/2018 4:19:00 PM

Wow so poetic... some excellent lines in this, especially that last stanza..

Daniel Turner

Date: 10/4/2018 4:08:00 PM

Now that's what I call inspiration. Nette, your passion bleeds from your pen. Stimulating poetry!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/4/2018 2:49:00 PM

Words, verses, and poetry ablaze..you did it friend..excellent depiction. Best for a win at the TOP, nette.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 10/4/2018 2:28:00 PM

Hello Nette, you have created a beautifully written poem. Have a nice day my friend.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/4/2018 2:11:00 PM

A unique and very lovely entry Nette. This is sure to garner attention! : )

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/4/2018 2:06:00 PM

Wow this one is certainly ablaze Nette. A brilliant write. Good luck. Tom.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/4/2018 2:05:00 PM

- Yes, beautiful is a perfect word on this poem Nette - Love the blazed feather floating on the river - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green

Date: 10/4/2018 1:22:00 PM

Well, there goes my chances of winning the contest. : ) This was absolutely gorgeous Nette, as all of your work is. Wow, just beautiful, I don't know what else to say.