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" INSPIRATION " MY PHOTO, ©

May be an image of flower and nature

"Give me words, Thousands of words, I offer my kingdom for words For A poem I wish to write Not any poem But A masterpiece of a poem!" The aspiring poet shouted, and then in a lower voice added: "Give me: Nouns, pronouns, adjectives, adverbs, Determiners, qualifiers, distributives, prepositions, Infinitives, gerunds, participles. Give me verbs: Regular and irregular, transitive and intransitive, Main and auxiliary verbs. Now give me tenses: Present, past, future, perfect, and conditional tenses. Active and passive tenses included. Don't forget to provide me punctuation as well: Comma, colon, semicolon, question mark, exclamation point, Hyphen, and full stop. Hurry up, please, Don't just stand there... Bring me a chair, a table, and in God's name, Paper, many sheets of paper of good quality. Oh, yes, I almost forgot I need a pen, not any pen but A golden one since this poem is going to be Immortal!" Then he paused for a while, and Continued his monologue. "I am all set: Here I go... I am about to start... Ready to put down the first line... .............................................. Nothing." He waited for a few seconds..... Still nothing............................. Not a single word comes to his mind... " What is wrong with me?" He wondered! At that moment, he heard a whisper. He turned around and saw his Muse looking at him with pity and as she approached closer she said: " My dear child, if you aspire a poet to be, poetry you should approach with awe, and not with the arrogance that you have here displayed. Moreover, your soul's eyes at once you must try to open to enable them to see the beauty that your mortal eyes fail to perceive! You also have to let your heartbeat follow the rhythm of inspiration which our Lord has put there for all of us to use, so as the language of heavens to speak which to you mortals as poetry is known! Remember that words alone would never be able to help you the poem that you desire to write, without the intervention of the divine!" Thus the Muse spoke to him and quietly walked away, leaving him behind with: His thousands of words before him, His grammar, His table, His chair, His paper of quality, and His golden pen in hand Which, alas, had not helped him a Single-word to write! © Demetrios Trifiatis 22 January 2021

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Date: 2/18/2021 7:14:00 AM
Saw this in top 100 poems list. Another great write. Photo is awesome. Do you have a garden?
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Date: 1/30/2021 2:45:00 PM
Cont- You, my friend, are a poet. One of the most gifted and wisest poets I have had the pleasure of knowing through your amazing poetry. Have a wonderful day, my friend. This going straight in to my fav collection:-)Alexis
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Date: 1/30/2021 2:42:00 PM
WoW! Demetrios, I don't know how I managed to miss such a deep and thought-provoking write. Your muse is very wise. Your poem as a whole is outstanding, but this portion wowed me to the core “ Remember that words alone would never be able to help you the poem that you desire to write, without the intervention of the divine!" Thus the Muse spoke to him and quietly walked away, leaving him behind with.” You have penned a masterpiece, and she awarded the poem of the day, week, or year.
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Date: 1/27/2021 8:45:00 PM
A favorite my friend should have gotten POTD honors!
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Date: 1/24/2021 6:15:00 AM
Great write Demetrios. To look beyond the words may be demanding or may be simple. Perhaps not at all. Trevor
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Date: 1/24/2021 8:54:00 AM
Thank you my friend, Trevor for your kind visit and comment. Blessings
Date: 1/23/2021 5:19:00 AM
Demitrios, for me this is your best poem you have posted, bravo to your muse (who we are closely related to!) I so enjoyed this write I read it three times over. Hugs and blessings my friend, Jennifer.
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Date: 1/23/2021 5:53:00 AM
Thank you so much, dearest Jennifer, for classifying it as the best poem I have posted, which obviously is not for it was not honored even as POTD, while other poems of mine have been honored around the world: One has been taught in senior high schools in Germany, another was used by DUKE university to make a documentary on love, and another was recited on New Year's Eve 2021 (see youtube) at a Concert for Peace Event in New York! Also, other poems of mine were honored in England and India! Many of my poems have been translated into several languages! Thank you again for your appreciation! Blessings and hugs!
Date: 1/22/2021 5:22:00 PM
WOW!!! My word but this is a MAGNIFICENT masterpiece of art... Outstanding job, Demetrios, I fave it :)
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Date: 1/22/2021 5:50:00 PM
So kind of you to visit and comment dearest, Akkina! Thank you for your precious comment! Blessings!
Date: 1/22/2021 10:59:00 AM
Hi Demetrios! An exquisite poem complemented by an exquisite photo. If our Muse doesn't guide our thoughts, the word vault is empty. Love this poem! Linda
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Date: 1/22/2021 2:45:00 PM
Thank you very much for your kind visit and comment dearest, Linda. Take care. Blessings!
Date: 1/22/2021 5:44:00 AM
Much depth to your words of wisdom my friend. Your message is on mark, Demetrios.
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Date: 1/22/2021 9:09:00 AM
Thank you, my dearest friend, Vijay, for your gracious visit and comment! I appreciate it! God bless you!
Date: 1/22/2021 3:52:00 AM
Wow.. amazing... after you wrote this masterpiece, am sure your muse would have wiped off her tears and she must be SMILING now. GREAT work Demetrios. ~ Ani
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Date: 1/22/2021 4:57:00 AM
So good to see you again dearest, Anitha! Thank you for your lovely visit and comment! Blessings!
Date: 1/22/2021 1:42:00 AM
Well written Demetrios and thought provoking too, one ingredient he forgot to add was from his heart and soul because that's where his muse resides. Hope you have a lovely weekend. Tom
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Date: 1/22/2021 4:56:00 AM
A pleasure to read your comment dearest, Tom! Thank you very much for taking the time to read! Blessings my friend! Take good care of yourself!
Date: 1/22/2021 1:11:00 AM
Wow. A fave... such a gem. Your muse is working overtime. Love and prayers
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Date: 1/22/2021 4:55:00 AM
Thank you so much for your appreciation, dearest friend, Regina! Blessings!

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