Word Castle

Building a castle full of words reaching to the sky Passing rainbows as we go Colors spreading ever high How high can the castle go Will it come tumbling down Words continue to flow, Which word will be the crown? The castle glows as it reaches the moon And begins swaying in the celestial wind Maybe this is as high as it can go A falling star puts on a show.... Words will follow in its glow 12-27-2022

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Valsa George

Date: 1/13/2023 9:23:00 PM

A castle built in words. It goes high and high touching the firmament. Beautiful composition, dear Joseph. Let your creative urge go rising up and up, and never coming down!

FJ Thomas

Date: 1/9/2023 10:12:00 PM

...I wonder where your mind was here. Was there something special or unique in your view? I really like the last stanza, but your last two lines made it perfect.

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/1/2023 7:33:00 AM

Oh , I love this Joseph! A Fave for me! :)

Beata Agustin

Date: 12/30/2022 6:57:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this. By God's grace, I greet you with the peace and joy of Christmas toward a prosperous New Year along this present: "the gift of God is eternal life through Jesus Christ our Lord" (Romans 6:23 of the King James Bible). God bless you.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 12/28/2022 7:44:00 PM

Building a castle with words is a brilliant idea. I think the wind will cause them sway to and fro- but that's okay, I'm enjoying the show. Keep reaching for the stars, Joseph. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) My best to you, in the New Year. :) Hugs, Brandy