Woodland Dusk

At the fold of day
a veil shrouds the hills
as rising fog drifts
over tapering fields.

Rain falls softly,
dimpling the river.
It’s sombre waters swaggering
beneath a narrow bridge.

Rambling oak trees line
the steep grassy banks.
Ferns furl
their long slender fingers
into tight fists.
They recoil
into rooted mouldy stone.

Moss carpets the woodland,
the earthy air, damp
as dusk slinks in.

A murder of crows
sweep the sky
smothering the light. 
Squabbling
they swoop to roost
on tall tree tops.

Settling,
a rustling murmur
whispers softly, sweetly.
They sleep
under a saffron moon.

silenced
by a blackening night.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Duffin Avatar
April 30, 2011 at 6:51 AM
Hi Eiken. Again you have woven fantastic colours into a memory filled landscape. I could smell the musty fern laden scent. I had not seen this before so congratulations on your win. Eamon
Laan Avatar
March 23, 2011 at 3:58 AM
Thank you all for your kind thoughts. I appreciate the wonderful contests here, such a great site for challenging me to write as best I can. I am growing here with your help. Many thanks!!!!!
Haick Avatar
March 22, 2011 at 12:52 PM
Congratulations on your deserving win in Catie's "Free Verse Contest", Eiken! Always, Annalise
Brown Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 10:46 AM
Congratulations to you Eiken for your win in Catie's contest "Free Verse Frenzy". Love, Carol
Beck Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 9:31 AM
every line is a gem of imagery and sound celebration..... well done and congratulations...Syd
George   Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 7:04 AM
AWESOME! Eiken. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Elaine
Onclaud Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 12:48 AM
hi, eiken.. enjoyed the tonality of this piece... my best congrats to you! :) hugg, nette
Sweetheart Avatar
March 20, 2011 at 3:33 PM
Congrats Eiken on your wonderful success in Catie's contest...excellent entry luv.. enjoy another big win..
Calhoun Avatar
March 20, 2011 at 11:38 AM
This is one of my favorites. The natural imagery vs natiure is astounding. Congratulations on your BIG WIN in Catie's contest. Best wishes, KC
Devonshire Avatar
March 20, 2011 at 10:04 AM
Not surprised to see this incredibly descriptive poem in the winners' circle, Eiken. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
Freeman Avatar
March 20, 2011 at 8:11 AM
Good to see you near the top Eiken. Congratulations on your worthy honor in the top Seven. Agape, Moses
Sweetheart Avatar
March 18, 2011 at 5:05 PM
Magnificent imagery Eiken .. every verse is expressive to it's theme ... luv the ending lines.. an awesome view my friend.. happy weekend..with luv..
Dietrich Avatar
March 17, 2011 at 10:53 PM
I read the comments below. Exquisite seems the most fitting one. And this is a definite FAVE for me!
Guzzi Avatar
March 17, 2011 at 1:32 PM
yes wonderful picture painting! did you know a bunch of owls is a parliment? LOL Thanks for reading me! Light & Love
Horne Avatar
March 17, 2011 at 11:25 AM
Beautiful imagery : ) Thanks for your kind comments. Jack
George   Avatar
March 17, 2011 at 10:56 AM
Absolutely beautiful, Eiken. Thank you for shariang. Lainie
Devonshire Avatar
March 17, 2011 at 8:22 AM
Exquisite images, Eiken. Thank you for sharing this magnificent image with us. Love, Carolyn
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