Jan Allison Poet Acrostic

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Wonderful

When I held you in my arms for the very first time,
Overjoyed that my baby boy was simply sublime.
New life that I had pushed into the world, 
Darling son, oh how my emotions whirled.
Every day brought us something new,
Recording every moment as you grew.
Filling our lives with laughter and joy,
Unconditional love for our beautiful boy.
Love you forever my wonderful son.

Contest:- Wonderful Acrostic
Sponsor:- John Hamilton
01~05~16

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Vladislav Raven February 13, 2016 at 1:01 PM Hi Jan, a wonderful write from your golden pen. There is no Love so complete than a mother's Love How wonderful to know that you bring life into a world, how through the years you nurture and protect your child, the Love you forever shower on your child, the tears and sorrows you bear, the joys and happiness you share. A life lived. What an excellent acrostic. A seven from me Jan. Hugs....MIKE. XX Jan Allison February 13, 2016 at 1:04 PM Thanks Mike my son is truly wonderful and I can't help but be inspired by him with my words:-) hugs Jan xx

Poet Destroyer A January 25, 2016 at 9:57 PM JAN, THANK YOU for blessing my comment with a reply. THAT WAS NICE OF YOU!!! PD**

Poet Destroyer A January 23, 2016 at 12:07 AM JAN, Congratulations on your Wonderful-Acrostic win. Hugs --Linda-- Jan Allison January 23, 2016 at 8:28 AM Thanks PD:-) Hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso January 16, 2016 at 7:10 PM Oh Jan, The photo is so cute and the poem so adorable! Jan Allison January 16, 2016 at 7:16 PM Just a pic from the web and a poem written from the heart:-) I wrote it the day before my son returned to university:-) hugs Jan xx

Rahy Hy January 14, 2016 at 7:18 AM Such sweet feelings Jan...Congratulations on your win ! Hugs, Rahy Jan Allison January 14, 2016 at 12:02 PM Thanks Rahy this was written for my wonderful son:-) hugs Jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma January 13, 2016 at 12:58 AM Congrats on ur awesome winning work Jan!! Jan Allison January 13, 2016 at 3:42 PM Thanks so much Dr Sharma:-) hugs Jan xx

Skat A January 12, 2016 at 11:46 PM Jan, Congrats on your Wonderful-Acrostic. ** SKAT Jan Allison January 13, 2016 at 3:41 PM Thanks so much Skat:-) hugs Jan xx

Viv Wigley January 12, 2016 at 10:23 PM A lovely, warm write, Jan, and if that isn't in his birthday card for this year, then I'm a monkey's dooberry. Well done. Viv x Jan Allison January 13, 2016 at 3:41 PM Have got a long way until his birthday may put it in his graduation card as it will be very appropriate then:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May January 12, 2016 at 12:38 PM Congrats on a wonderful win Jan Jan Allison January 12, 2016 at 1:04 PM Thanks Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx

Hansteven Selfa January 12, 2016 at 7:48 AM Truly wonderful Jan! Congratulations on your win! Jan Allison January 12, 2016 at 1:04 PM Thanks Hansteven:-) hugs Jan xx

John Hamilton January 12, 2016 at 6:44 AM What a beautiful acrostic, you are really improving in this difficult form! 37/40 Well done! Jan Allison January 12, 2016 at 1:03 PM Oh wow thanks John - this is dedicated to my son he really is wonderful:-) hugs Jan xx

Emile Pinet January 9, 2016 at 10:20 AM This is a beautiful story, laid out well, described with feeling and written with the heart of a mother. Emile. Jan Allison January 9, 2016 at 1:19 PM Thanks Emile my son means the world to me he really is wonderful:-) hugs Jan xx

CayCay Godwin January 7, 2016 at 2:25 PM Your turn to push my baby boy button! I enjoyed this touching poem very much - just beautiful (no pun intended about other acrostic contest) ... CayCay Jan Allison January 7, 2016 at 2:29 PM Thanks CayCay my son went back to university yesterday and was very touched by the poem I'd written:-) hugs Jan xx

Kp Nunez January 7, 2016 at 11:09 AM Ah, isn't motherhood grand? Most of the time...lol! You wrote a very tender and loving poem in acrostic. all the best in the contest, Jan! hugs :-) PS. sorry about his returning to his dorm, hope you get to see him soon! hugs Jan Allison January 7, 2016 at 11:11 AM He has a long haul ahead for his finals but he will succeed :-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich January 6, 2016 at 8:31 PM hey, I thought up a subject. Take a guess what I will be showing soon! Jan Allison January 7, 2016 at 10:40 AM You will be showing us your wonderful poem soon lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Jean Murray January 6, 2016 at 5:56 PM How lovely to read this on my middle daughter's 23rd birthday. Can there be a relief like when the head is born? Jan Allison January 7, 2016 at 10:40 AM No relief until the little one is in your arms Jean - my little one is 22 and is much taller than me lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus January 6, 2016 at 4:26 PM A lovely write, Jan, and pleased that he read it and liked it. Pity that he has to go back, but that's how life is! Hope you are all keeping well:) Hugs ~ paul Jan Allison January 7, 2016 at 10:42 AM He's safely back yesterday - it will be very heavy going for him now with assignments and his dissertation project but the end is in sight for him:-) hugs Jan xx

Thomas Martin January 6, 2016 at 3:05 PM Lovely poem! Much luck in contest. Jan Allison January 7, 2016 at 10:42 AM Thanks Thomas:-) hugs Jan xx

Eileen Manassian January 6, 2016 at 12:37 AM It's a wonderful poem, Jan. Very sweet. The love shines through. Good luck.... Jan Allison January 7, 2016 at 10:43 AM My son is wonderful:-) hugs jan xx

Edward Ebbs January 5, 2016 at 11:27 PM I think this is wonderful, great job! Jan Allison January 7, 2016 at 10:39 AM Thanks Ed - my son went back to university yesterday he was really touched to read the poem I wrote for him:-) hugs Jan xx

Dalia Shahein January 5, 2016 at 6:51 PM Your wonderful my dear Jan , your son is a lucky kid to have such a kind, nice , good hearted and careful mom such as you , and I'm sure that he'll be proud and pleased with this mesmerizing, magnificent and gentle unique poem my dear , best of luck in the contest though I know that you don't need it cause it's already a winning poem 4 me , I give you a 7 and a big hug // :) Jan Allison January 5, 2016 at 7:03 PM He's just read it and loved it:-) hugs Jan xx

Abdul Malik Mandani January 5, 2016 at 6:34 PM It's a good write Jan. Good luck. Jan Allison January 5, 2016 at 6:39 PM Thanks Abdul:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith January 5, 2016 at 6:10 PM This is Wonderful Jan. Those first years with your child are precious. Jan Allison January 5, 2016 at 6:11 PM He is the best thing ever to happen to me Tim - he's back to University tomorrow I am just so so proud of everything he has achieved:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich January 5, 2016 at 5:57 PM Ha. I would not be seen writing about MY son, but my daughter yes!! (maybe I should do that) Still thinking on this one. You did a GREAT job of it, Jan. Jan Allison January 5, 2016 at 5:59 PM Thanks so much Andrea it is hard to think of a subject:-) hugs Jan xx

White Sage January 5, 2016 at 5:48 PM excellent write Jan, i wish you the best in the contest Jan Allison January 5, 2016 at 5:58 PM Thanks so much White Sage:-) hugs Jan xx

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