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Wonderful-1

W ondrous is our love, a thing that dreams are made of O bserving and preserving love's expression of devotion N atural sensations form inside us, causing a commotion D esire explores new pathways revealing a pleasant truth E mptying the river gorges, winding past visions of youth R eleasing and relinquishing all doubt and unfounded fears F orevermore wanting to, wrestle away your shrouded tears U nexpected treasures await us in this journey they call life L oving, laughing, living together as blessed husband and wife.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/5/2016 1:07:00 AM
Your poem exudes the treasures of a happy family John. It is lovely! Blessings to you and yours this New Year. Connie
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Date: 1/4/2016 5:17:00 PM
Your word choices are clever, feeling, descriptive, and imaginative. The story line reflects the harmony created between two people of one heart. Emile.
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John Hamilton
Date: 1/4/2016 8:19:00 PM
Thanks Emile so very nice your comments very much appreciated!
Date: 1/3/2016 6:38:00 PM
now that IS wonderful, John. You do love your acrostics!!!
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John Hamilton
Date: 1/4/2016 8:17:00 PM
Thanks Andrea I appreciate it.
Date: 1/3/2016 5:03:00 PM
Another very nice acrostic, John.
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John Hamilton
Date: 1/4/2016 8:16:00 PM
Thanks Lin give it a try you will do well!

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