Women

Having only mere minutes to skim your sighs,                 
anesthetize the tip of your unseemly thoughts...        
with platitudes for quandaries which fly bye,  
we are so much more than frail flowers you have wrought.

We are the breeze, the muse, the bringer, the envoy          
lending at days end, the tenderest bits of heart
as on the keys or sewing clothing seams with joy  
our fingers never rest 'till days end, from days start.

Our hands grace the garden beds smudged with chlorophyll
and our arms wrap about a naughty childlike pet
then come to rest behind a trusty Parker's quill
for we give so much more with love and no regret.


Poet: Debbie Guzzi
Contest:"I'm More Then What you Thought"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Macfarlane Avatar
March 20, 2012 at 4:46 PM
Excellent write Debbie.....congrats on your win!
Brown Avatar
March 19, 2012 at 11:35 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Michael's contest Debbie. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
March 18, 2012 at 7:58 PM
wow,I am just now seeing this. And you won in the contest. I am really glad about that, MUCH deserved win. Congratulations. I really like how you talked about us women!!
Puddifoot Avatar
March 18, 2012 at 5:22 PM
congrats for a super, vividly worded poem - I can just picture those hands "smudged with chlorophyll", some nice internal rhyme (lending, end, tenderest) "our fingers never rest 'till days end" - how true! :-)
A   Avatar
March 18, 2012 at 12:28 PM
Debbie, nice saying for MJF, contest.. Congratulations~always*PD
M V Avatar
March 17, 2012 at 10:54 PM
It's great,Debbie.Congratulations on your well deserved win!My book will be published before August 31st.I will inform you more details in time.As you mentioned earlier,if you'll visit India in 2012, you can attend the function.Lovingly,FABIYAS
Sweetheart Avatar
March 17, 2012 at 11:23 AM
congrats Debbie on a super win for these exciting words on contest theme .. u are more than woman .. u are TEACH..luv.. oh..
Maverick Avatar
March 12, 2012 at 11:27 PM
Well put Debbie, i really like homey everday writes; "enjoyed the things special to all" that you have put a womans perspective into and onto that i belive is so nessesary in life..)
Chappell Avatar
March 12, 2012 at 12:44 PM
wonderful write
Merryman Avatar
March 12, 2012 at 12:11 PM
A fantastic write, Debbie. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Kim
Shines Avatar
March 12, 2012 at 10:34 AM
excellent.power of women
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
March 11, 2012 at 8:35 PM
Girl power! Love your poem...wanted to say thanks for your kind words on my Sunday morning and with love and respect we can agree to disagree about the paths to God. God is love, I think we can both agree on that! Love and blessings, Rhonda
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