Woman, the Lighted Candle

Women of the world, my tribute to you!
                        You are the mother, you are the wife,
                      You are the daughter, you are the sister! 
                   you are the breath of womanhood! You have 
                      nourished, you have protected ..families, 
                       with your strength, your ability to heal..
                     Woman, you are the lighted candle which 
                     illuminates world with harmony and peace. 


                     Women of the world, you are ruby-red roses 
                    in flower-gardens, you spread the fragrance 
                of amaranth emanating from heaven, music from
                      your harp, serenades magic on the cosmos,
                         you are the rain which drizzles earth.
                     Today's modern women or yesteryear's wise,
                      You are the candle which burns and burns
                      to ensure love and happiness in the world. 


                      My salute to you, Women empowered, who
                          ignored all obstacles..epitomes of
                           intellectual and spiritual virtues,
                   decided your own path, had your voice heard. 
                    you became creative writers, and teachers, 
                   talented composers, and poets..you became 
                     Joan of Arc, you became Rani Lakshmibai. 
                 You are Marie Curie - the candle which reignites.


                    Kindness, and compassion - virtues which heal, 
                       virtues turn into bravery when you need. 
                     You have all - You passionately love, nurture,
                         you fight, you sacrifice, you wipe tears. 
                        Women of the world, believe in yourself...
                        You are the candle which keeps burning 
                    to shine an aura of light in darkness and despair,
                         in sorrow, grief, and intense sufferings.

                         Woman, You are Nature's Supreme Gift!


                                        
                                         March 23, 2022
                        For " Tribute To Women" Poetry Contest 
                                   Sponsor: Beata Agustin
                                         FIRST PLACE
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Goldsmith Avatar
April 26, 2022 at 7:38 AM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a "Wonderful" write. Love it. Have a blessed day writing away....................
Ray Choudhury Avatar
April 26, 2022 at 11:38 AM
Thank you, Dear Paula. Truly appreciate your support and your lovely comments.
Kauffman Avatar
April 23, 2022 at 9:33 AM
"You are ruby red roses in flower garden." What a beautiful image among the beautiful images in your garden of tribute and recognition of women and our roles. Mala, this is such an admirable picture of women. It is no wonder to find it on the winners list. Congratulations dear friend. Hugs and blessings.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
April 26, 2022 at 11:37 AM
Thank you, Dear Sam. I feel very strongly about the empowerment of women.
George Avatar
April 23, 2022 at 5:13 AM
"You are the candle which keeps burning to shine an aura of light in darkness and despair, in sorrow, grief, and intense sufferings"...... ! Wonderful tribute to the empowered women of today ! You bring honor to our sex by being an outstanding poet ! Congratulations, dear Mala !
Alex Avatar
April 23, 2022 at 12:26 AM
"believe in yourself" - A great advice especially to the ones lacking self-confidence. Congratulations!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
April 26, 2022 at 11:36 AM
You are right, Christuraj. Many of us lack confidence in ourselves. They need to understand how precious they are!
Agustin Avatar
April 22, 2022 at 9:42 PM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this ode. God bless you.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
April 26, 2022 at 11:34 AM
Thank you, Beata. I am honoured.
Baker Avatar
March 29, 2022 at 4:54 PM
Amen, a wonderful descriptive tribute to God's gift to humanity...Woman. Your poem was inspiring and uplifting. I was blessed with a loving and godly mother and grandmother. I'm married to my soulmate, and I'm honored to be chosen to be her husband. I hope your Ode encourages many young women to be the best they can be and bow to no one except their creator God. Smiles ~ Blessings, Bill
Ray Choudhury Avatar
April 2, 2022 at 2:21 PM
Dear Bill, beauty of your inspiring words touched me deeply. Your comments are received with joy and gratitude. I am glad to know about your loving mother and grandmother - that’s a remarkable blessing in life. Your wife is lucky woman to be with you, and you are equally fortunate! “ I hope your Ode encourages many young women to be the best they can be and bow to no one except their creator God” - these words gave me so much joy! I started writing a bit late in my life, still hope to continue with inspiration from my poet-friends. Blessings ~ Mala
Deo Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 7:55 PM
Mrs. Choudhury Ji, my first ( now of 3 comments) was devoured by cyberspace and PS - but thank God I could thank u for your great work. shalOm shalom aur Namaskaar
Ray Choudhury Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 8:09 PM
Dear Poet and My Friend, Namaskar and Shalom. I am actually Mrs. Ray - Choudhury is my maiden name. I am really glad to know that you liked the Ode. Perhaps it reminded you of your mother - I am so sorry to hear that she passed away in her sixties. Are you located in South Africa? I was born and grew up in India, but finally moved to Canada. It's also inspiring to know that you enjoyed my translation of Tagore's poems. I am originally from Bengal, so very very influenced by Tagore's work. Thank you for your uplifting words. Will look forward to reading your poems. Best wishes ~ Mala
Deo Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 7:54 PM
Om Tat Sat, Rani Luxmibai aur Jhansi Rani ki Jai. So too for my Mom, according to your translation of NOBEL LAUREATE NO 1 India's R. TAGORE (from 2020). My mom died in her 60s about my age, breast cancer, in South Africa. Aap kin ai hoh!
Brul Avatar
March 26, 2022 at 2:26 AM
Fine tribute to our heroines. Best luck in the contest.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
March 26, 2022 at 6:07 AM
Thank you, JCB. Your comment is so appreciated.
Dutta Avatar
March 25, 2022 at 11:05 PM
Great All the best for Contest Love
Ray Choudhury Avatar
March 26, 2022 at 6:06 AM
Thanks, Anisha. Appreciate your visit and comment.
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