Woman of Indiscretion

Proclaim thee a Lady? 
Oh, they of ignorant mind
Neither good or bad, but human, this man
Vexed of own passion, o' cunning love
Keep'st eyes blinded of all thy own wisdom and trust
Lest eyes well-seeing thy lady's foul faults shall find
Thy woman of past indiscretion, hath scarlet ribboned veins
Unknowing from whence cameth thou, she
Fancy fleeting bird be now belied
Wilt he never see her feathered locks,  promiscuity?... 
How  boldly foolish is his name!
That on himself such murd'rous shame commits
What haste and wile steals thy seasoned eye?
Yea, who tamed the sea, yet drowns in thee?
While wed to one, yet flys away
Against tongued wrath, society
Against cruel slander of thy fame
Against the wind, self dignity
Fancy fleeting bird wilt you, fly on scalded wings
With scandal your offerings 
Till own death near, to die in shame 'tis worth the game?
To shun the heaven that leads a man to hell?
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"Old English Scandal"  Lady Hamilton
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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December 26, 2012 at 8:52 AM
This is such powerful old English and its message resonating like a chapter of the Psalms...so impressive Carrie! Love the images of scalded wings and scarlet veins...NICE! Here's to hoping u had a nice Christmas time with your family and friends...we are having a thunderstorm/ice, and blizzard...what a mixed bag! Luv, gwendolen
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July 7, 2012 at 10:41 PM
Carrie, , congratulations In Lisa's old english scandal contest. it was nice visiting all her winners~always Good night PD
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July 3, 2012 at 1:25 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the "Old English Scandal" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
Guzzi Avatar
June 30, 2012 at 6:15 PM
A fine write! Congrad's on your win Light & Love
Johnson Avatar
June 30, 2012 at 5:57 PM
This is well written and exciting. Congratulations Carrie. Love, Joyce
Williams Avatar
June 30, 2012 at 12:46 PM
carrie congrats on your win, excellent read..David
Williams Avatar
June 29, 2012 at 1:40 AM
Carrrie, oh sweet fair maiden, thou dost lighten myne own palabras, good luck..David
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June 28, 2012 at 1:07 PM
Carrie - Have you EVER written a bad poem? Maybe just ONCE when you were just a youngster? Nah...didn't think so! This has got to be for the medieval contest. I not even gonna TRY on that one...Best regards to you my good friend
Dietrich Avatar
June 25, 2012 at 9:47 PM
I think you will take the prize. This is about as old English sounding as it gets, my dear!!
Palmer Avatar
June 24, 2012 at 4:17 PM
nice write Carrie,wishing you the best
Guzzi Avatar
June 21, 2012 at 2:35 PM
You go gal!! The Bard would be proud! Light & Love
Kendrick Avatar
June 21, 2012 at 5:45 AM
Great work..Captivating work that reads like a winning entry..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara
Henderson Avatar
June 20, 2012 at 2:44 PM
Wow...thas all i got...just wow....Peace and blessings....
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