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Woman In Chains

WOMAN IN CHAINS. Remember, when I was ‘the thing?’ When I was a chair, just there, with the remote on your coffee table, the cup of coffee you placed next to it, so you just had to lift your left hand to enable, you to reach them; You placed me there, like the chair. You admired my face, which became a flag, that made me, your thing, to honour,or disgrace. Did you rape me? I didn’t say no, I didn’t speak. I lay in the bath, whilst salt water, rolled down the black, swollen bulging growth, that yesterday, had been my cheek. You offered, in a silent command, to help me out, holding a towel, in front of your chest; I knew where I was going. The bed was old. The air was cold, and the sound of the children in the room below, seemed to drown out the rest; Small voices, muffled in their detachment and confusion, of the inexplicable energy, of chaos, and illusion; And because of these same, sounds-sake, they stifled any, I could make. And you, marked your territory, like a mongrel dog, peeing on a wall. A dog without humanity. In that act, that basic, ugly act, the ‘thing’ felt a shame, and ashamed. It was then, that the Goddess within, awoke, arose, and began to shine.

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Date: 4/15/2021 1:26:00 PM
Hi Janine This is a sad poem and an unfortunate ordeal that some women go through. Regards Mpho Kgaswane.??
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Janine Lever
Date: 4/24/2021 10:55:00 AM
Thank you Mpho, i appreciate your comments.
Date: 4/13/2021 1:08:00 PM
Janine, It hurts when love turns bad and cruel and life seems useless. I'm glad the goddess arose! I wrote a similar one called Pride which I haven't yet posted.There's so much of this hiding behind lovely gardens and perfect houses. Hugs.
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Janine Lever
Date: 4/24/2021 10:56:00 AM
Hello Ann, thank you for your comments, yes, the goddess arose and shone. I would love to read your Pride poem please let me know when you post it.
Date: 4/12/2021 9:28:00 PM
Yes. Bold steps to be taken against 'A Dog without Humanity.' CONGRATS. Love.
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Janine Lever
Date: 4/24/2021 10:57:00 AM
Thank you Anisha. The goddess rose and shone in freedom in the end. You caught the essence of the character in your comments. i appreciate your words.
Date: 4/12/2021 12:45:00 PM
Hi Janine, Powerful write, you kept my attention to the last word. Frances
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Janine Lever
Date: 4/24/2021 10:58:00 AM
Thank you frances for your comments, truly appreciate them.
Date: 4/12/2021 11:48:00 AM
This is amazing
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Janine Lever
Date: 4/24/2021 10:59:00 AM
Thank you Nobuntu for your comments. I appreciate them very much.
Date: 4/12/2021 11:30:00 AM
Truly powerful... Sent my thoughts on a familiar journey... Congrats, “phenomenal woman” you are! Very Best! Phyl
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Janine Lever
Date: 4/24/2021 10:59:00 AM
Thank you so much Phyllis for your comments. They are appreciated greatly. xx
Date: 9/1/2020 11:09:00 PM
I agree, a powerful write. Stands apart. The remote control start brings readers in to the demented sceneario. Ending redemption is simply touching, uplifting. Congratulations on well written entry Win!
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Janine Lever
Date: 9/2/2020 6:00:00 AM
Thank you Sigrid. Much Appreciated
Date: 9/1/2020 8:36:00 AM
A powerful write Janine, I think the first time reading you, loved everything about this write, so well done, congrats on a nice win!
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Janine Lever
Date: 9/2/2020 6:00:00 AM
Thankyou John, much appreciated.
Date: 8/21/2020 6:42:00 PM
A moving and powerful piece.
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Janine Lever
Date: 8/22/2020 2:45:00 AM
Thank you Sharon. I appreciate your words very much.
Date: 7/14/2020 2:12:00 PM
there is a "Mighty Bridge" continuing on into and all throughout this very "Moment." Moving on in "Peace Infinitely!" "Stretching Out" from shore to shore "Rising Up" over the quiet lands, of our "Hate" of our "Love" "Rising Up" over the "Muddy Waters" of our "Indifference" "Towards" "These Efforts." This "Bridge" is the "Mighty Bridge" of "The Conscious and Continuous Journey" into the "Full Acceptance" of our "Creator" of "Ourselves" of "All Life" for just how this "Is" and "Can "All" Be" with "All" of us "Working Together" "Ever-Diligently" "With" our "Creator" and with "All Life" "Consistently" "Continuously, and "Ever-Patiently." Our "Mighty" and Ever-Generous "Creator" will "Meet, and "Greet" us, "Here!"
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Janine Lever
Date: 7/14/2020 2:14:00 PM
THANK YOU

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