Woman At Window

A Native American lady,
  In a scintillating...crimson dress,
    Embellished with shells and stars.

Gazing directly at the viewer, 
  The image of her face casts a grimaced look,
    As if she sweats blood from cultural shock.

The clash of cultures are layered,
  A cowboy belt adorns her Indian dress,
    Turn-of-the-century wallpaper frames the window.

A Cannon landscape...backdrops  the setting,
  Native to his style of puff-ball trees,
    Under the ice cream...clouds of the sky.




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For Abe's Native American Ekphrasis Contest


http://www.tccannon.com/art.html

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La France Avatar
July 1, 2009 at 12:54 PM
Congratulations o n your win, great poem
Strand Avatar
June 30, 2009 at 11:55 PM
Congrats on your succes in Abe's contest Raul.Rgds Brian.
Gorelick Avatar
June 30, 2009 at 3:13 PM
NObody does it quite like you do! Congratulations on your wonderful win. BG
Richards Avatar
June 30, 2009 at 2:22 PM
Congratulations Raul....you write so that we can find the beauty!! Well done!!
Hudson Avatar
June 30, 2009 at 2:16 PM
Congrats Raul on placing third in the contest. A well deserved honor!-AA
Winter Avatar
June 30, 2009 at 12:37 PM
Warmest congrats Raul on your excellent and most well deserved win in Abe's contest! Love, Shar
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June 30, 2009 at 12:18 PM
Powerful poem. Congratulations on your third place win with this well-written piece. Your talent shines through. Enjoy your honor. Karen
Lopez Avatar
June 30, 2009 at 10:40 AM
congratulations you have won 3rd place in the contest."Native American Ekphrasis"(t.c. cannon) Thank you for supporting my contest. ..........Alopez
Tugaff Avatar
June 1, 2009 at 10:05 AM
Very beautiful and good luck in the contest. Ernilando
T. Avatar
June 1, 2009 at 4:07 AM
Beautiful poem, love the last verse.
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
May 25, 2009 at 3:06 PM
You also paint a picture. Vince
Fraser Avatar
May 21, 2009 at 3:17 PM
Nice poem Raul, best of luck in the contest, James
Shango Avatar
May 21, 2009 at 8:16 AM
All the best in the contest ... his landscapes are something else, are they not? Powerful write!
Chircop Avatar
May 21, 2009 at 2:25 AM
awesome-and i love the laste verse"under the ice cream...clouds of the sky"--good luck for your entry--charma
Reynolds Avatar
May 21, 2009 at 2:14 AM
Excellent picture in words, Raul. this is going to be a hard contest to judge. amazing! Love, Kristin
Loving Iii Avatar
May 20, 2009 at 4:40 PM
half and half. comming to the rescue soon. jhl
Guzzi Avatar
May 20, 2009 at 4:29 PM
I saw reined in hostility...hankering to wrap the belt about the neck of the first stray "white folk" present....Christianity doing little but reinforcing the righeteousness of death....shiver..a God's or a man's
Megens Avatar
May 20, 2009 at 11:52 AM
I SAW WHAT YOU SAW THANK YOU FOR THE IMAGE
Mason Avatar
May 20, 2009 at 11:30 AM
Beautifully done, Raul and a winner in my book ... smile ... great visuals with this one!!
Peranteau Avatar
May 20, 2009 at 5:10 AM
Raul,..this is seriously wonderful,..you captured my attention with this and brought reality to a head in a concise write,..love it Raul ! james
Winter Avatar
May 20, 2009 at 4:30 AM
Excellent description Raul, with so much more behind the look in her face. I feel so much from the last line in the second verse. Well done and good luck! Love, Shar
Higgins Avatar
May 20, 2009 at 4:12 AM
This is awesome..love the story like quality to the piece..this contest has brought out some very good work..best wishes talented one in the contest.
K Avatar
May 20, 2009 at 3:41 AM
Very beautiful......best wishes in the contest
Nutter Avatar
May 20, 2009 at 2:50 AM
Well done best wishes and good luck in the contest.
Docherty Avatar
May 20, 2009 at 1:17 AM
Wow, what beautiful picture you paint with this lovely imagery...thanks for stopping by to comment, Anna-Marie.
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