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Woman

“The Hand that Rocks the Cradle is the Hand That Rules the World” by William Ross Wallace
Oh! Woman Aren’t you God’s supreme handiwork? An animated form of chiseled art A joy to behold A figure of curvaceous ups and downs God’s beautiful calligraphy You are love incarnate Your eyes reflecting warmth and gentleness Smoothening the rough edges of life A loving daughter to your parents An adorable mate to your man A forgiving mother to all The procreating womb of mankind The forger of destiny One who turns barren terrains, Into blooming verdant meadows The fountain spring of life In every drop of adversity, Glistening like a diamond With a divine spark that lies dormant In broad daylight, but beams and blazes In the dark hours of adversity Though you are fickle and frail in many eyes You’re strong enough to withstand all the shocks And delicate enough to bend and bow Sweet enough to draw everyone to your charm Tough enough to bear extra burden You have a heart very deep To hold gallons of liquid love And a mind patient enough To forbear all rebukes You are blessed with a temperament Willing to forgive and forget You are warm enough To kiss away all tears You bear the seeds of progeny You are the powerhouse of strength and healer of woes With the magic talisman to cure the bleeding hearts You are the great MOTHER to all Sister, friend, mate and guide- all rolled into one April.3.2022 ~ Placed First~ Tribute to Women Poetry Contest Sponsor- Beata Augustin

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Date: 4/26/2022 7:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Woman" is a lovely write. Have a blessed day writing away.......................
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Date: 4/23/2022 9:37:00 AM
"Powerhouse of strength and healer of woes" - what a wonderful description of the feminine Valsa, power and gentleness. Your lovely write overflows with these wonderful contrasts that truly are women's traits. Congratulations on your win! Blessings to you!
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Date: 4/23/2022 3:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your win - "You’re strong enough to withstand all the shocks And delicate enough to bend and bow" - this line sums it all. Brilliant poem, Valsa. Blessings ~ Mala
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Date: 4/23/2022 12:33:00 AM
"powerhouse of strength" - True. Seen in day-today life through each woman character. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/22/2022 9:50:00 PM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this ode. God bless you.
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Date: 4/23/2022 4:30:00 AM
Much delighted by this placement ! Thanks a lot Beata for the opportunity given and your gracious rating ! Stay blessed dear friend !
Date: 4/4/2022 7:46:00 AM
This is a winning poem "You’re strong enough to withstand all the shocks And delicate enough to bend and bow" - this was terrific.
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Date: 4/4/2022 5:06:00 AM
Great work, & for millions, it's not enough. But my mom, few aunts ( on each side), and my second mate do many magical services this poem celebrates. We celebrate Poet VG, in Jesus's graces. Always. Amen
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Date: 4/3/2022 8:29:00 PM
Indeed, your golden pen has the power to enthrall and inspire, Valsa. Your poem is a powerful yet delicate ode to women! This beautiful piece captures the very essence of womankind with every poetic line. "An animated form of chiseled art /A joy to behold /A figure of curvaceous ups and downs /God’s beautiful calligraphy" - exquisite! Your precious words fill me with elation and pride and brings honor to women everywhere. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you, my friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 4/3/2022 11:35:00 AM
Matriarchal systems root with mate, the heavenly way to start each day . . . .Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 4/3/2022 8:37:00 AM
Your poem bestows honor on women allover, Valsa--they indeed rule the world. Much credit to them for many roles they play to sustain a family. And kudos to you for writing this ode to women.
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Date: 4/3/2022 7:55:00 AM
Great tribute to all upright women who labour to keep a sane family. Blessings.
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