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Wolpertingers Roam

Spring peaches ripen in the moon's shadow. On the other side, wounded lambs moan I grasp a whiff of strawberries       inimical twilight          cynical quadrant               whimsical                   nonsensical I am not a wolf, a hawk, or an ocelot no time for lake-bound lizard yetis tales I am a hunter, not a storyteller peculiar and acrid to pin down you'll be the host of my arrow Wolpertingers roam wild in the forest                               incongruous                      torturous               antlers         fangs                     Your marble-nailed hands prevent iniquity                heat remove the betrayal from my soul the agony of being shunned                doubtful of your decision and yearning your words poison my psyche               my heart ached with love, life, and lies I would never lie if I had shame  tattered fur     untangle wings           clasp paws                  milked leaves releasing ice vapors into the air I saw the green comet fly across the cosmos despite the lore that, wasn't even static. Written: February 03, 2023 6th place contest winner Contest No 1180 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Date: 2/5/2023 6:07:00 PM
Dear Lasaad, the imagery and spirit of this poem enthralls my imagination and reaches deep into my psyche, easily touching both with the vibrant potency of your vivid verse. Whimsical and fantastical! Congratulations for your excellent win in Brian’s contest. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 2/4/2023 8:37:00 PM
From where do you hunt all these information about such mythical creatures. Scary and interesting at the same time. Your imagination is always abuzz and you can mint out poems at will. I gape my mouth reading your surrealistic poems. Congratulations dear Lasaad.
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Date: 2/4/2023 6:53:00 PM
I missed this one my friend. Congratulations Lasaad on your Win. A clever tale and a creature I would not wan t to meet. Thanks for sharing...
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Date: 2/4/2023 11:00:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Las :) - hugs
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Date: 2/4/2023 10:13:00 AM
A huge CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, Lasaad. with this descriptive, symbolic poem! Janice
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Date: 2/4/2023 6:15:00 AM
Intriguing theme my friend. Your pen keeps scripting brilliant tales. Best to you, Lasaad.
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Date: 2/4/2023 3:31:00 AM
- Feels like an experience of life in the world of mystery, Las - Excellent writing - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 2/3/2023 11:02:00 PM
I wonder where you discovered this mythic predator. They hunt in packs and devour all they find. I suppose every country has a sort of bogeyman to make children behave. Well writ poem.
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Date: 2/3/2023 8:19:00 PM
Lasaad, you've done a fine job, weaving a tale around this strange, mythical animal. Beautifully written, my friend.
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Date: 2/3/2023 7:30:00 PM
That's great, love it
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