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Wolf

Orange eyes like tiny topaz crystals glisten as he watches the sun go down, fading into a sea- like sky of yellow and orange. Lost. He finds a howling lost cub. Two is stronger than one he thinks. And lightly clasps the delicate cub in his bloodstained teeth. Shortly, after 8 weeks of starvation the wolf became extremely famished... A few seconds later the young, oblivious pup looked up to find it was gazing into the now blood-thirsty, ravenous wolf’s once sparkling orange now wicked red eyes. He will never forgive himself for what he did, but he will forget. By: Ava Douglass Age: 12

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/27/2010 7:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Ava. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/26/2010 10:25:00 AM
Many congratulations on having your poetry featured >> James
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Date: 1/16/2010 11:39:00 AM
anyone who reads this, can you realise what actually happens in this poem and what it means? please tell if you can tell!! (:
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Date: 1/16/2010 11:37:00 AM
thank you. i like yours too! Are you the owner of this website or who is? :)
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Date: 1/16/2010 10:32:00 AM
Ava Welcome to Poetry Soup young one! You are among friends here! Loved reading your beautiful poem. I think you would enjoy reading my 5 poems Journey home. It tells a story of wolf dog and it's a wonderful adventure. Let me know how you like it. And Ava keep writing and I'll keep reading your poetry!! Bless your heart young one, I see talent here!! Love Light Patty
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Date: 1/16/2010 10:21:00 AM
Thanks for reading my poem!! :)
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