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Birthday celebrations have pagan roots. According to Funk & Wagnalls Standard Dictionary Folklore, Mythology, and Legend, these celebrations originated from the belief that on a person’s birthday, “evil spirits and influences have the opportunity to attack the celebrants” and that “the presence of friends and the expression of good wishes help to protect the celebrant.” The book The Lore of Birthdays says that in ancient times, birthday records were “essential for the casting of a horoscope” based on “the mystic science of astrology.” This book adds that “birthday candles, in folk belief, are endowed with special magic for granting wishes.”  The Bible, however, condemns the use of magic, divination, spiritism, or “anything like this.” (Deuteronomy 18:14; Galatians 5:19-21) In fact, one reason why God condemned the ancient city of Babylon was that its inhabitants practiced astrology, which is a form of divination. (Isaiah 47:11-15) Jehovah’s Witnesses are not preoccupied with the roots of every custom; yet when the Scriptures give such pointed indications, we do not ignore them.

Ottava Rima

a-b-a-b-a-b-c-c rhyme scheme
8 Lines, 11 syllables
 
For my beloved sister 
The eldest sibling wisest, and loveliest
She is a true believer in our Lord  
I respect her wishes NOT to celebrate her Birthday--I Am Anaya

(a non-birthday wish for my sister)

Without Words Which May Displease

How then shall I show love for our sisterhood?
Our mother’s baby birthed on this joyous day
A festive time   with wishes  ‘happy’  and  good
No balloon  filled  room,  cake,  gifts on display
Belief systems stand first  it’s well understood
So, in all due respect and come what may                                                                                                                 
Just poetry  for YOU  showing how I care
Without words which may displease God, I share

Without salutary words which may offend 
In toughest of times with me you’ve always been
Soulful eyes  I’d run to,  my hurt you’d suspend
One hundred, forty four thousand for heaven
My selfless sister shall   be one in the end
Devotion  has  earned a  palatial inn
Forever dwelling on a pure restored  earth
A poem for you this day mother gave birth
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Beaufort Avatar
January 31, 2025 at 5:56 PM
Anaya, fondness and love for your sister shines in the poem you wrote. I think she won't mind what you've placed here. I'm thinking how wonderfully lucky you are to have her in your life. Sounds like she loves you too and has some beliefs she holds dear. Glad you repeat her and didn't have a surprise party. That would probably not go over very well. Smiles!!
Anaya Avatar
March 14, 2025 at 10:09 AM
This was her only surprise, and I think she really liked it. I love my sister. Smiles back to you!
Maverick Avatar
January 26, 2025 at 11:45 AM
There is truth in what you have put Anaya.' A Lot of celebrations have pagan roots' one of The worst being misletoe ( a tree cancer ) so Because it grows regardless as to what it does To the host tree druids revered its live at all Costs as a (holy fertility typolology) oh well if You know then don't go.?? Hmm I guess with Birthday celebrations its more acceptable to God.?? As it is a new giving life.' Hmm? Good Of you to recognise your sisters concern Like this.' All the best.)
Anaya Avatar
March 14, 2025 at 10:11 AM
Thank you for reading, Joe. I obey her wishes! :)
Dietrich Avatar
January 22, 2025 at 12:41 PM
A lovely tribute to her, Anaya
Anaya Avatar
March 14, 2025 at 10:06 AM
Belated Ty, Andrea!
Tor Avatar
January 21, 2025 at 12:07 PM
How thoughtful Anaya to write this heartfelt piece for your Sister Silvia. What a wonderful sister you have to be so meticulous in knowing God's words. I am so impressed of her commitment to God. I am sure she is Truly blessed. Reading this Ottava rima the reader can feel the love and appreciation you have for your sister. You are blessed to have such a sister and she is blessed to have you. God bless you both...
Anaya Avatar
January 21, 2025 at 12:18 PM
A poem was the least I could do for her, Michael. She takes care of everyone, our Mother for instance, NOT in a nursing home. Thank you so much and blessings!
Tor Avatar
January 21, 2025 at 12:08 PM
Also Anaya thank you for the scripture information on Birthdays, great effort on your part to share...
Goldsmith Avatar
January 19, 2025 at 11:04 AM
#1.I am sending in 2 parts. Too much writing & it will not go through. I really enjoyed reading your write. Great information here. I did not know Birthday celebrations have pagan roots. I know the Bible, condemns the use of magic, divination, spiritism, or “anything like this.” My friend is Jehovah’s Witnesses & will not do birthdays but can not tell me why.
Anaya Avatar
January 20, 2025 at 2:47 PM
It's a deeper devotion, Paula.
Goldsmith Avatar
January 19, 2025 at 11:03 AM
#2.She gives her grandkids gifts the month of their birth but not on the day. Just a thought about your sister. Could she pick a day to celebrate life, then celebrate with gifts, cake, balloons for both of you."OR" maybe a day to celebrate your sisterhood with gifts, cake, balloons. "Good Luck" in the contest. Have a blessed day...................
Anaya Avatar
January 19, 2025 at 11:13 AM
Yes! I went on a visitation and there was cake and ice-cream on the table and a gift...I asked if it was Zoe's (her granddaughter 4 at the time) Birthday and she answered No, every weekend they have cake ice cream and a gift for her. This only lasted that year of course. (ha)
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