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* Ok, bear with me, for these couple *deep poems.  And yes, I know... it's long. lol

Sometimes life, it takes a turn Sometimes a very long one Things going in a downward spiral Out of your control, no matter what you do There comes a time, you just can’t put on smiles You can’t fake it, to be fine You know one day, the direction will change But for right now, it’s not that way You do what you can day to day As the sun sets on loneliness, darkness drips You wait for the next sunrise to come Because the rays of hope exist Sometimes, there are not answers Just a place of being amiss So patience is now your friend As waiting takes over time For some, these turns can’t be avoided No matter how hard you try With many waking moments, wondering why But here lies the truth: - No life is perfect - The winds change and move us In a moment’s time, and without notice Sometimes the winds keep on blowing Bringing more and more your way Where it seems you can’t stay still - And so the practice begins - - How to be still - In the currents, through the storms While staying afloat in the floods left behind It can be done, one moment at a time - When one does not wonder, *what if? - Heidi Sands 9/5/18

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Date: 9/6/2018 2:47:00 PM
Yes Heidi, this never ending current of life carries all of us but as you say, negative can change to positive in a moment. we must hang on. A lovely message in a lovely poem ' Happy Thursday xxoo
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/6/2018 3:01:00 PM
Yes we must hang on Mike! Thank you for your kind comment. Happy Thursday :)
Date: 9/6/2018 11:54:00 AM
The changing tides of life...superbly depicted, my dear friend...and thank you for your continued support, Heidi...you are a beautiful soul of love & light...^WW^
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/6/2018 12:31:00 PM
Thank you WW. I appreciate your kind cmment today. Love and Light :)
Date: 9/6/2018 10:48:00 AM
Yes--sometimes life changes unexpectedly..you depicted well the coping mechanism..well done, Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/6/2018 10:53:00 AM
Thank you Vijay :) I appreciate your feedback.
Date: 9/6/2018 10:33:00 AM
Good work about life. Sometimes there is good and sometimes bad. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/6/2018 10:38:00 AM
Thank you Sara and you are welcome :)
Date: 9/6/2018 2:54:00 AM
I always compare life to the ocean, sometimes calm other times fierce storms. Well written verse Heidi. Tom
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/6/2018 3:50:00 AM
Thank you Tom :)
Date: 9/5/2018 9:07:00 PM
"The rays of hope exist" and shine through the dark clouds ..Well expressed Heidi..best wishes..
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/6/2018 3:49:00 AM
Thank you Joseph :)

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