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Within Those Skies- Collaboration

memories linger as i exalt all admiration; there is something about that sky that lures me in the way it blushes long before the mountain drips blood-red from an emerging sun that magnetic fascination just provokes intoxication then leaves me yearning for more yet it's the night sky where nature is unparalleled beneath that ebony backdrop the glow of a million stars glimmer all around the milky splash that looks like heaven's opening it stirs emotions supernal leaving me feeling deeply compelled to wish upon the crimson flashes that trail through the edges of black July 29, 2019 for contest FINETUNE THIS COLLABORATION sponsored by Line Gauthier

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Date: 8/5/2019 4:11:00 PM
Wow, Sandra! I stand back and see the night sky through your eyes! Congratulations!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 8/5/2019 6:04:00 PM
thank you...the rocky's skies are beautiful and went well with Lines words :) hugs
Date: 8/5/2019 5:52:00 AM
Thanks for entering my contest. Love the nostalgic element you incorporated, Sandra. Congrats on your top win.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 8/5/2019 5:58:00 AM
Thank you so much Line for hosting the contest and for deeming my poem worthy of a top win ... it was a fun collaboration:) hugs
Date: 7/30/2019 6:59:00 PM
A well woven and intoxicating write of splendid imagery. Truly your collaboration is all those things - a jewel. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Sandra Adams
Date: 7/30/2019 7:29:00 PM
Thank you Cay Cay....my muse seems more refreshed since my small vacation, perhaps some of it is the beauty that i saw while away.... hugs :)
Date: 7/29/2019 3:56:00 PM
Good penning Sandra, showing nice imagery as well as being moody too. Poetry hugs, Gordon
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Sandra Adams
Date: 7/29/2019 7:04:00 PM
thank you Gordon....the images from my vacation are showing up in all my recent postings :) hugs
Date: 7/29/2019 3:19:00 PM
steeped in deep words and melancholic moods...finely written, sandra...huggs
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Sandra Adams
Date: 7/29/2019 7:02:00 PM
Thanks Nette, i struggled with this one a little....sometimes my muse is fickle when i try to stay within guidelines :) hugs

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