Within the Whispered Wind

Within the whispered wind, bumble bees
fly their syncopated figure eights.
Praying mantises fall to their knees
	…within the whispered winds.

Rich blessings float from heavenly gates
and set kissing dragonflies at ease
before all worldly sorrow abates.

Sunday psalms sung softly in the breeze
settle where the flock congregates.
Hallowed ambience exudes heartsease 
	…within the whispered wind.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Peck Avatar
August 19, 2025 at 9:27 AM
Beautiful thoughts, Linda. I love "within the whispered wind." Such a gentleness is conveyed.
Fowler Avatar
August 21, 2025 at 6:48 AM
Thank you Ann. Always a pleasure with your visits. :)
Wolf Avatar
August 3, 2025 at 8:27 PM
Enchanting and magical, Linda. This poem simply sparkles and shines. A fave for me. Thank you.
Fowler Avatar
August 4, 2025 at 10:02 AM
Hey gw. Thanks, and a fav, WOW. I'm honored. laf :)
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 3, 2025 at 5:16 PM
a beautiful and well penned Roundel. I especially liked the 2d verse. May have to try this form sometime. Wishing you a pleasant evening, Sara
Fowler Avatar
August 4, 2025 at 10:02 AM
Many thanks Sara. Do write one! They are not that difficult. Jope your week is filled with wonder. :)
Alhemaidy Avatar
August 3, 2025 at 4:06 PM
Lovely enjoyed read of a nice roundel poem! Have a nice day lovely Flower ~ hugs xx AA
Fowler Avatar
August 4, 2025 at 10:01 AM
Hello my friend. Hope you week is entertaining. Thanks for visiting. YF :)
Goldsmith Avatar
August 3, 2025 at 12:39 PM
I enjoyed reading your lovely write. Have a wonderful day writing away...........
Fowler Avatar
August 4, 2025 at 10:00 AM
Thanks dear Paula. hugs :)
Hind Avatar
August 3, 2025 at 11:53 AM
Love this refrain! A very calming effect to this - "heartease" love it
Fowler Avatar
August 4, 2025 at 10:00 AM
HI Paige. Glad you enjoyed this. :)
Fleming Avatar
August 3, 2025 at 10:19 AM
Nicely set out - enjoyed! :) john
Fowler Avatar
August 4, 2025 at 9:59 AM
Thank you for visiting and for leaving a kind comment John. :)
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