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Within a Matter of Minutes

It certainly is amazing how quickly things can change. A day that started off peaceful has ended up with pain. A son's acquaintance came in the house and invited our son to go out. Within the matter of an hour, he came back in with a shout "He took my keys from off of me". This just should not be. "I must go back and confront that thief and take back what was taken from me". I went into his room and found the key he thought was lost. He dropped his head in shame and tried to figure things out. You all just don't understand the shape that I am in. I am in purgatory and can't find no peace within." My head began to throb from all the noise I hear. Talking with the stronghold is tearing at my heart. I pray, pray. and pray-When will this madness stop.

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Date: 1/31/2009 6:09:00 AM
Having just turned 60 I am becoming increasingly forgetful... I like to think of it as eccentric! Your son should be easier on himself... it happens to us all, regardless of age. Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 1/18/2009 7:45:00 AM
Mary I truly wish i could answer the closing question in this poem - Though regretfully all I can do is keep praying that at some point the lords love will break through the darkness - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 1/18/2009 6:16:00 AM
Oh Mary, it is heartbreaking to read of all the strife in your life. So glad you can at least write it out here, and have your friends keep you in their prayers. Wishing you the best, and may all your prayers be answered. Love, Shar
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Date: 1/17/2009 10:48:00 PM
Nice free verse Mary...Raul
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Date: 1/17/2009 10:44:00 PM
This was very emotionally written, I sense a lot of pain and anguish, so many emotions flowing within ones soul due to the battles and constant struggle of everyday life. I hope and pray that you all find the peace and the answers you so desperately seek. Fantastic write. God Bless You * Love Tyesha
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