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I love decay . . . like buildings, walls, grave stones, and the withering- of a word... on a page that moans; so, I pen my sadness that groans, must, must write- so I will not crumble out of sight . . . ___________________________ May 26, 2019 Poetry/Rhyme/"Withering" Copyright Protected, ID 1147029 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Excerpt from my poem "Crumbling" Submitted to the contest, Arbitrium Divisa sponsor, Gregory R Barden Third Place

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Date: 6/24/2019 8:40:00 AM
and the withering of a word...on a page that moans; This pulled my heart. Congratulations on your win. This is beautiful
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Date: 6/24/2019 5:59:00 PM
Jeanne, thanks for visiting my poem, and for your comment and the congratulations but especially for the beautiful !
Date: 6/13/2019 5:56:00 PM
Nice and deep, Constance. And that ending line is superb! Congrats, dear heart.
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Date: 6/14/2019 1:33:00 PM
Andrea, thanks for the compliment and the congrats ~
Date: 6/13/2019 9:51:00 AM
Lovely, Constance. Powerful. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 6/13/2019 10:46:00 AM
Line, thank you for the compliment and congratulations !
Date: 5/27/2019 1:57:00 PM
Yes, even the page moans! Beautifully imaged, Constance. G.L. in the contest. Best wishes, Gershon
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Date: 5/28/2019 11:14:00 AM
Gershon, thanks so much for visiting my poem and commenting ~
Date: 5/26/2019 12:36:00 PM
Hi Dear Heart: I love your subject matter and approach to this rhyme. I wish you well in the contest.
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Date: 5/26/2019 12:41:00 PM
Ralph, thank you so much for visiting my poem and for the comment ~

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