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With Your Eyes

I am enjoying everything! With your eyes! The incessant rain on a valley ~ the blessing of a sun-kissed day ~ the snow-capped mountain-peaks ~ the glorious sandy beach ~ the glow of a gorgeous morning ~ treasure all! I am admiring the rugged mountains ~ the steep hills ~ the formidable sand-dunes ~ the wild dances of waves in the oceans ~ everything, with your eyes! I am not heartbroken, I am not sad at all - This world is magnificent! You will bring all to me, saved in your heart ~ like a pearl encased in a shell of memory, and reveals only for a special one, when the time is right. I am enjoying ~ with your eyes ~ and no one else's. May 23, 2020 Published in "Without Me, Without You" (Ebook and Paperback at Amazon) First Place - Brian's Choice R Sponsor: Brian Strand Have You Published Poetry Contest (Second Place) Sponsor: Line Gauthier Featured Poem for the week of August 16, 2020 Featured Poem For The Week Of July 4, 2021

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Date: 11/24/2020 2:15:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Malabika
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/24/2020 5:44:00 PM
Thank you, Dear Poet. Appreciate your lovely words ~ Mala
Date: 11/24/2020 3:30:00 AM
Mala, congratulations in Line's, Have You Published with this beautiful poem, each line, each word is amazing _Constance
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/24/2020 5:53:00 AM
Thank you so much, Constance. Appreciate your inspiring words. Love ~ Mala
Date: 11/24/2020 2:18:00 AM
So happy to see this favourite in winners' list...Congratulations dear Mala..
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/24/2020 5:54:00 AM
Thanks so much, Dear JCB. Appreciate your lovely words. Hugs ~ Mala
Date: 11/24/2020 1:32:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/24/2020 5:55:00 AM
Thanks so much, Beata. Really appreciate your lovely words. Hugs ~ Mala
Date: 5/26/2020 6:22:00 AM
This passionate gem deserves the win! Congratulations dear friend.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/24/2020 5:56:00 AM
Thank you, Dear Friend. True, it was written in a passionate moment. Love ~ Mala
Date: 5/25/2020 5:57:00 AM
A winning write! Congratulations Mala. ~mo
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 5/25/2020 9:05:00 AM
Thanks so much, Mo. So glad you enjoyed the poem.

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