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With Your Eyes

I am enjoying everything! With your eyes! The incessant rain on a valley, the blessing of a sun-kissed day, the snow-capped mountain-peaks, the glorious sandy beach, the glow of a gorgeous morning - enjoying all! I am enjoying the rugged mountains, the steep hills, the formidable sand-dunes, the wild dances of waves in the oceans - Everything, with Your eyes! I am not sad, I am not sad at all, This world is beautiful! You will bring all to me, Saved In your heart, Like a pearl encased in a shell Of memory, and opens up Only for a special one, when time comes. I am enjoying, with your eyes, And no one else's. May 23, 2020 First Place - Brian's Choice R

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Date: 5/26/2020 6:22:00 AM
This passionate gem deserves the win! Congratulations dear friend.
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Date: 5/25/2020 5:57:00 AM
A winning write! Congratulations Mala. ~mo
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 5/25/2020 9:05:00 AM
Thanks so much, Mo. So glad you enjoyed the poem.