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With Windows Open-Bite Sized Poetry Contest

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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The little flowers whose petals hang in bunches, white eyelashes fluttering within the tumult of the zephyr. Tiny taunting gestures flirting Newtonian tugs solitary dandelion puffs dipping toes in the air. Dove calls and wind which set wild drapes to whipping ‘tis a March day pregnant with spring breezes that smell like childhood.

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Karen Croft

Date: 3/29/2024 6:08:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement. A lovely poem for the season

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/30/2024 4:38:00 AM

thank you, dear Karen, for both your compliment and congratulatory words. Have a splendid weekend, Sara

Tonye George

Date: 3/29/2024 4:07:00 AM

Congratulations on your Win dear Sara.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/29/2024 4:49:00 AM

thank you! You're most generous and kind. Have a lovely day, hugs Sara

Paige Hind

Date: 3/20/2024 4:54:00 PM

Nostalgic feeling I get. It was all beautiful to picture.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/20/2024 5:10:00 PM

thanks Paige! I appreciate your visits today. You made my evening, hugs, Sara

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 3/18/2024 4:34:00 AM

Hi Sara, This is such a visual delight!! you are so wonderful at painting with your words. I don't know how you and so many others can keep crafting these poems on a daily basis like this? Amazing write.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/20/2024 5:09:00 PM

thanks for visiting and for your kind and complimentary words, Nancy. I don't know how I write like I do...caffeine and personal adrenalin and a deep desire to express what comes onto my heart. Have a great evening, Sara

Regina Elliott

Date: 3/17/2024 3:59:00 PM

So beauteously penned, poetry friend. A dreamscape of early spring. Bravo! Sunday evening blessings. ~

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/17/2024 6:17:00 PM

awww, thanks Regina...'dreamscape of spring' is a lovely comment. Thanks for your visit and have a blessed evening, hugs. Sara

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/17/2024 11:07:00 AM

Love this write/picture. March/Spring is a great time of the year.... "Good Luck" Have a blessed day writing away..................

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/17/2024 6:16:00 PM

thank you, Paula. You're always so kind. I appreciate your consistent visits, hugs & blessings, Sara

Ink Empress

Date: 3/17/2024 7:43:00 AM

Absolutely gorgeous, your words are so soulfully artistic and the way you paint imagery is impeccable. I always admire the way you write and this one right here Is flowing with such exquisite lines . Your slight use of alliterations and descriptive language really stood out for me! Another excellent take. Best wishes for the contest

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/17/2024 6:15:00 PM

thank you, Ink, for noticing the details within my short poem. Your visits and words of encouragement mean a great deal to me. Wishing you a great evening, hugs, Sara

Silent One

Date: 3/17/2024 7:07:00 AM

This is so lovely, nice imagery and a sentimental feel to it... best of luck in this contest..

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/17/2024 6:15:00 PM

thanks dear Silent one. Grateful for your visit and complimentary words...enjoy your evening, Sara

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/17/2024 6:28:00 AM

Lovely poem Sara--serenading the sights and sounds viewed through your window and brought to fore by your splendid pen. Much enjoyed.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/17/2024 6:14:00 PM

thanks, Vijay. I always welcome your kind words about my poems. Have a splendid evening, Sara

Gary Radice

Date: 3/17/2024 1:52:00 AM

Your six lines ooze and drip so much atmosphere Sara. Thanks for sharing. Cheers - Gary

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/17/2024 3:56:00 AM

thanks for visiting, Gary, and for your kind words. Have a splendid day, Sara

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/16/2024 7:48:00 PM

Such a kaleidoscope of imagery and alabaster alliteration, Sara. Superb! thanks, Gershon

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/17/2024 3:57:00 AM

thank you, Gershon, for your enthusiastic comments. Appreciate you...enjoy your Sunday, Sara