With Such a Verse

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With such a verse that touches hearts pure, deep emotions it imparts. So great it brings an eye to tears or calms a child’s unwanted fears. The poet’s mental searching starts. These phrases have that certain smarts that enter minds like verbal darts. Read words that last throughout the years With such a verse In metaphor this form of arts will reach the top of all the charts. Poems of love are oh so dear inspiring poets far and near to find the beauty in all parts With such a verse 7/21/19 Rondeau Poetry Contest Sponsored by: charles messina STRAND SELECT 9 Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 1/12/2020 6:26:00 PM

Hi Janis, Congratulations on your HM. Love the phrase "verbal darts."

Brenda Chiri

Date: 1/12/2020 1:10:00 PM

Congratulations on your HM!;)

John Gondolf

Date: 8/4/2019 10:40:00 AM

Beautiful poetry, Janis, congrats on your top win. John

Charles Messina

Date: 8/4/2019 8:03:00 AM

Such a lovely read Janis. Your pen continues to glow. Fantastic write my dear friend. Congratulations on your top win! Hugs Charlie

Funom Makama

Date: 7/30/2019 1:49:00 PM

Just lovely to read. Its been a while I have been here and I am happy not to regret flipping through some lines of which yours are part of them... Great craft, lovely message.

D.W. Rodgers

Date: 7/21/2019 1:42:00 PM

Well done, I really liked the lines "inspiring poets far and near to find the beauty in all parts"

Janis Thompson
Date: 7/21/2019 5:02:00 PM

Thanks D.W.

Sand Blown

Date: 7/21/2019 11:09:00 AM

'...to find the beauty...[in our hearts] ...with such a verse'...reads so clear

Janis Thompson
Date: 7/21/2019 5:01:00 PM

I wish I could say it that way but I don't think I can. I cannot refer to that word again but that makes sense. Actually the whole of the last line ends in hearts like the first line.