With Open Arms

Come to me my child
Rest your head in my lap
My hand strokes your wild curls
Feeling the dampness on your neck
Lamplight caresses your flushed cheeks
Shadows waltzing on the walls

You gaze at me with pools of wisdom
Infinite eyes that have lived lifetimes
Speaking silent words 
You gift me with your knowledge
The fire in you burning bright
Bringing me back to my heartbeat
Which rises and falls in gratitude
With your presence

Come to me Mom
Rest your tired feet upon my lap
Let my eyes and heart envelop you
I will massage away weary time
Let me give you my touch
Gifting you energy as I receive yours

I look into your eyes surrounded with
Father Times’s crevices
Each line an active nuance
A roadmap of your journey here in space and time
A thumbprint of your joy and pain

Remembering sitting on the countertop 
Cracking eggs in the bowl
Making cake together 
Handing me the batter covered spoon so I could lick it
And me giving it back so you could lick it too

Come to me my love
I long to feel your touch
Cradle me in your arms so I can smell you
Touch my eyelids with your gentle breath
My fingertips awaken
I feel your forehead, your neck, your chest
My heart vibrates as I find your back
Covering it with sweet kisses

Come to me my friend
We have journeyed through darkness
We have waded through tar
We have risen from the depths of the darkest oceans
Sharing strength, inspiration, and resolution

Come to me shy one
Come to me stranger
Come to me wounded soul
Come to me frightened one
Come close dear animals

Fill me up with your breath and secrets
Let me dance with your essence
We are one intertwined soul united
I open my heart to you

Plants - germinate, flower and bloom
Release your seeds
To fly on the wind and the wings of falcons 
Bringing new life to distant shores

Let us rise above the chatter
Rise up with me above the dense greyness
To sanctuaries in the sky
Arriving at cloud castles
Adorned with abundant neon moonbeam pillows
To jump on and roll in

Stardust silently falling 
Like snowflakes kissing our noses
Velvet musical notes hover nearby 

Our forms expand as we join as one 
One light floating upward
A fuzzy pink radiant vibration
Our inhales and exhales merge

Wrapped in sacred unity we rise further
Heavenly fish swim by winking at us
Winged dolphins join in leaping over lavender cloudbanks
Starbursts and light bursts pulsate around us
As we dance together in laughter
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Ray Choudhury Avatar
September 3, 2022 at 6:18 AM
Dearest Susan, I am in awe! Every time i read your poems, I wish I could write this way! How emotional, how lyrical, how sublime! My favourite poet, this has to go to my FAVES. I am not able to mention one line - each and every line from you here is divine! Susan, you are a gifted poet, and your poem is a magical one. Love and blessings. Keep creating such masterpieces ~ Mala
Lawrence Avatar
September 5, 2022 at 7:52 PM
Dearest Mala, I am honored and humbled by your words dear friend. You are such a special mind, heart and soul and I am in gratitude for you. Thank you thank you for your heartfelt comments and your fav. I am so very happy to share such loving space with you. Big hugs and love and blessings, Susan :) xx
Fowler Avatar
August 23, 2022 at 7:01 AM
Wow, emotive and stimulating Susan. An interrelated trip through all our relationships. Linda
Lawrence Avatar
August 23, 2022 at 12:58 PM
Thank you Linda ! Happy to ride this ride with you . Blessings, Susan :)
Salehi Avatar
August 8, 2022 at 4:41 PM
What great connections you portrayed.
Lawrence Avatar
August 19, 2022 at 11:49 AM
Pashang, Thank you thank you. So happy for your visit. Susan :)
Brul Avatar
August 4, 2022 at 9:53 AM
This poem comes to me like open arms that soothe and caress the soul within me. A fav for me to be read again and again for years and years to come. ^_^ JCB
Lawrence Avatar
August 4, 2022 at 2:16 PM
How wonderful to have you visit JCB and honored by your fav and lovely comments. I am thrilled you could journey with me . Big hugs and blessings, Susan :)
Zahid Avatar
July 25, 2022 at 10:26 AM
That's a beautiful write... Very well penned. Thanks for sharing. Stay blessed
Lawrence Avatar
July 26, 2022 at 8:03 AM
Thank you Paghunda ! I am enjoying reading your lovely poems . Blessings, Susan :)
Goldsmith Avatar
July 18, 2022 at 7:53 AM
"With Open Arms" is a wonderful write. I wish you would write more. Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away...........
Lawrence Avatar
July 26, 2022 at 8:03 AM
Thank you dear Paula ! Loving your writing ! Hugs, Susan :)
Peck Avatar
July 15, 2022 at 9:41 AM
Dear Susan, Your poems always bring me to tears with their beauty. Such a sweet, precious poem to your child. So many lovely lines ~ this one I especially love ~ "velvet musical notes hover nearby"~
Lawrence Avatar
July 16, 2022 at 6:18 AM
Dear Ann, I am honored by your visit and kind words .I am thrilled my poem moved you . Your presence here is a gift . Sending you love and all good wishes. Susan :)
Rodrigues Avatar
July 11, 2022 at 7:54 AM
Especially poignant to me, the verses about your mom! I lost my Mom a year ago April. Oh how I would rub her feet, would love to make cookies once again. Us sisters made raisin cookies together this past December. We remember the beauty that is our mom. Hugs ~ Kim
Lawrence Avatar
July 12, 2022 at 6:13 AM
Dear Kim, Thank you for your visit and lovely comments. I adore my Mom and cherish all time spent with her . I am so sorry to hear about your Mom. These moments in time are so precious. How many sisters do you have ? I am one of 3! Nice you gathered to make raisin cookies together . Simple pleasures and wonderful to honor your Mom’s beautiful spirit . Hugs to you , Susan :)
Mcconnell Avatar
July 9, 2022 at 1:31 PM
Congrats on the POTD Susan, warmly deserved with nice imagery and insightfulness. Take care, Gordon
Lawrence Avatar
July 12, 2022 at 6:11 AM
Dear Gordon , Thank you my friend . I appreciate your visit and participation. Keep writing ! Blessings, Susan :)
Tor Avatar
July 3, 2022 at 3:36 PM
Wow Susan first off Big Congratulations on your well deserved Win! i love your imagination and creativity. I think my heart skipped several beats reading this wonderful creation of yours. Your talents to reach the inner soul in your words is a quality few have. I am sorry I missed this when it was written and Im glad I found it. God bless you and keep writing, wow!
Lawrence Avatar
July 4, 2022 at 9:44 AM
Michael , Thank you for your visit and your abundant gracious comments . I am humbled by your response . I greatly appreciate your visit and participation in my journey. Blessings to you . I look forward to reading more of your poems ! Susan :)
Kalita Avatar
July 3, 2022 at 3:36 AM
Congratulations on POTD Susan, what beautiful invocation and musing!
Lawrence Avatar
July 3, 2022 at 3:16 PM
Thank you Silpika for your visit and lovely comments! Susan :)
Sands Avatar
July 2, 2022 at 10:50 AM
Oh. This is amazing. Congratulations! Well written. A Fave for me! :)
Lawrence Avatar
July 2, 2022 at 4:26 PM
Thank you dear Heidi ! So appreciative of your visit and Fav! Blessings, Susan :)
Lamoureux Avatar
June 25, 2022 at 1:11 PM
Congratulations as well for POTD.
Lawrence Avatar
June 25, 2022 at 3:56 PM
Thank you my friend. Hugs, Susan :)
Lamoureux Avatar
June 25, 2022 at 1:09 PM
I can see why this resonates with so many people. A pure pleasure to read. Hugs Rick.
Lawrence Avatar
June 25, 2022 at 3:56 PM
Thank you Richard ! Thrilled with your visit ! Looking forward to reading more of your work soon ! Hugs, Susan :)
Kamoonpuri Avatar
June 25, 2022 at 12:38 AM
Woww such a heartwarming poem, sentimental and recalling the moments with the loved ones, unique as it appreciate the child, your parent as well as the spouse. I smiled at the cake batter stanza, how alike we all are yet we seek differences. Kudos!! Plz also read and comment on my newest poem too.
Lawrence Avatar
June 25, 2022 at 3:55 PM
Thank you for your visit S.zaynab ! Your comments are welcome and your participation cherished . Yes we really are all one - one heart - one breath - one energy - one collective soul. Enjoyed visiting your poem today . Blessings, Susan :)
Jayasankar Avatar
June 24, 2022 at 7:26 AM
Wow my dearest Susan, I have no words left to express how much you inspired me as I read this poetic gem of yours...What a masterpiece of yours...This is for sure a FAV., and a hearty congratulations though a little late, for the POTD honor...Have a blessed day dear friend...Big hugs...~ Ani
Lawrence Avatar
June 25, 2022 at 1:37 PM
Dearest Ani , You are such a shining light and radiant heart ! Honored by your words and Fav!I am always inspired by the beauty you create. So happy to have found you here . Big hugs my friend, Susan :)
Callus Avatar
June 21, 2022 at 10:25 AM
Dear Susan, at the cost of repeating myself, I have to admit that there is satisfaction in answering to the urge of reading and rereading your captivating words. You have the ability to connect with your readers, drawing them into the vortex of your inspiration. Another addition to my favs, my friend. Also congratulations on p.o.t.d. award. Watm regards & Hugs // paul
Lawrence Avatar
June 25, 2022 at 1:35 PM
Dearest Paul, Thank you for gracing me your visit . I am so appreciative of your support and kind words and honored by your fav! You are such a special poet and person . Thank you for taking this journey with me . Big hugs and all good wishes . Love, Susan :)
Leffanta Avatar
June 18, 2022 at 11:20 AM
Congratulations on your POTD! It seems every poem you have posted earns POTD and/or POTW, so thank you for stirring the Soup! I guess that proves getting it right beats getting it posted! Aloha 'oe!
Lawrence Avatar
June 18, 2022 at 1:10 PM
Thank you my friend ! I value you more than words can say ! Hugs, Susan :)
Gentile Avatar
June 18, 2022 at 7:27 AM
Susan, yes belated congratulations for me as well! This is so enticingly beautiful in its welcome to the universe! Such wonderful lines, one and all, crafted by love! Exquisite!! Happy Saturday xxoo
Lawrence Avatar
June 18, 2022 at 11:01 AM
Mike, Thank you so much for your wonderful comments and congratulations. My heart is happy! You are such a special soul. Happy Saturday to you ! Hug, Susan :)
Buhagiar Avatar
June 18, 2022 at 6:51 AM
My belated congratulations for your POTD. How blissful is the relationship between mother and child and vice versa. A splendid poem. Pity I often forget to check the POTD's although the admiration were supposed to inform me.
Lawrence Avatar
June 18, 2022 at 10:59 AM
Thank you dear Victor for your return visit and congratulations. I am grateful for you. Thank you for taking this journey with me. Blessings my friend, Susan :)
Proxenos Avatar
June 17, 2022 at 2:15 PM
Like snowflakes kissing our noses velvet musical notes hover nearby .........adorned with Abundant neon moonbeam pillows to jump on and roll in......our inhales and exhales merge wow dear friend what sa radiant magical poetic imagination you have been gifted wit. A true blessing. Hugs and blessings Jennifer. POTD truly deserved dear Susan .congratulations.
Lawrence Avatar
June 18, 2022 at 10:57 AM
Dear Jennifer, You have such a special soul and are in-tuned to beauty around you. Your comments fill my heart. Thank you for your visit and presence. I appreciate you journeying with me. Big hugs to you, Susan :)
Ray Avatar
June 17, 2022 at 11:13 AM
what a read, line by line swimming in the pools of wisdom's emotions....excellent
Lawrence Avatar
June 18, 2022 at 10:54 AM
Dear Timothy, Your presence here is so appreciated. I am honored by your comments. Blessings my friend, Susan :)
Seeker Avatar
June 17, 2022 at 1:35 AM
Superb! Wonder how I missed this one. The last two stanzas sum up the transition to unity consciousness so eloquently.
Lawrence Avatar
June 17, 2022 at 6:21 AM
US - Thank you for your visit and comments. You are king at writing about unity consciousness! Blessings, Susan :)
Ashley Avatar
June 16, 2022 at 6:02 AM
Dear Susan, it is my great pleasure to return to you with my heartfelt congratulations for this exquisite poem being honored with POTD. Your rich, embracing and transcendent poetry gently cradles and lifts the heart and soul of the reader.. and I relish the awe-inspiring feeling. May my warmest wishes find your moonbeam pillows, my sweet poetry sister.. ~Susan
Lawrence Avatar
June 16, 2022 at 5:51 PM
Poetry sister Susan , your kind words and your second visit leaves me filled with a deep sense of warmth and satisfaction. I feel your hugs from distances far away and I’m very grateful to have you in my life. Wishing you the sweetest dreams as well on moon being pillows. Hugs and love, Susan
George Avatar
June 15, 2022 at 10:49 PM
Susan, you stand with hands wide open to embrace each one, each bird and beast and each breathing thing in the enclosure of unity. The conversation between the mother and child is so delightful and heart warming. When boundaries fall down and each one is bonded together in oneness, there arises, dance and symphony, mirth and laughter. Great poem as ever. Congrats on the well deserved POTD
Lawrence Avatar
June 16, 2022 at 5:49 PM
Dear Valsa, So very happy for your visit and your wonderful comments. I always love your words and your heart on display in your poems. You have such a deep mind and heart. I have been enjoying your work. Big hugs to you and all good wishes love, Susan
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