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With Me Every Moment

You are the tea leaves I am the tea pot I the tiny snowflake and you the snow Ode to Mum_ by Maria Williams ______________________ I am me Mum, because of you- if I, inherited even a bit of you I am blessed; you had not an enemy in this world, you were a listener, a friend, an anchor. When I asked you, "Mum, what should I do?" you would reply, "You know the answer." We would talk about things in your garden, sipping tea in the shade, just you and me; we loved all seasons, walks in the rain and snow, these are the memories I keep in my heart. When I use your tea pot, I am with you, when the rain falls on me, it is you; when the snow kisses my lips, it is you, when the sun shines on me, it is you. Although you are gone Mum from Earth, you are with me every moment of everyday. __________________________ February 27, 2020 Poetry/Verse/With Me Every Moment Copyright Protected, ID 20-1230-801-03 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Written for the Contest, Poetic Lines- Maria Williams sponsor, Silent One, Inspiration - choice #1 Second Place

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Date: 3/26/2020 11:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I love where you write, "We would talk about things in your garden, sipping tea in the shade, just you and me;" I wish I had that place to run to. Be safe and enjoy your day....... .
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Constance La France
Date: 3/26/2020 8:19:00 PM
Paula, thanks for the congratulations, I have many wonderful memories of my mother, not a day passes that I do not recall one and miss her all over again _Constance
Date: 3/25/2020 11:07:00 PM
Dear Heart, great written poem from the one line and a big congratulations on your win in Silent One's contest-Stay safe and healthy my friend. Hugs Eve
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Constance La France
Date: 3/26/2020 10:26:00 AM
Eve, thanks for the congratulations, yes that was a beautiful line, when I first read Silent's contest, I knew that would be the line for my entry _Constance
Date: 3/25/2020 2:49:00 PM
- I miss my mother's wise answer too   ... moving beautifully, dear Constance :) - Congratulations on your win :) - Stay healthy and safe :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Constance La France
Date: 3/26/2020 10:28:00 AM
Anne-Lise, thanks for the congratulations and the beautiful, I miss my mother so much each moment , each minute, each hour of each day, when will you stop mourning I was asked, and I replied never _Constance
Date: 3/25/2020 5:48:00 AM
A lovely tribute to your mum... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Constance La France
Date: 3/25/2020 1:47:00 PM
Silent, thank you for another great contest and for my fine placement _Constance
Date: 2/28/2020 8:34:00 AM
Beautiful. I have some clippers from my Grandfather and when I use them I feel a connection to him. objects can have great emotional significance.
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Constance La France
Date: 2/28/2020 11:11:00 AM
Richard, thanks for the beautiful, yes, I have many things of my departed family that make me think of them and feel close to me _Constance

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