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With Each Breath

Love was in a harvest beneath crimson skies Unknown to the beloved before their eyes Hope almost forgotten through losses in the past Only misty fragments floating in memory to last Too focused on the deep, dark shadow of pain In the left over puddles laying after the rain The tempest from yesterday had blown away dreams Leaving the heart coming apart at the seams But, with the grace of God came the shining light On the shore of new beginnings waiting in sight Compassion renewed, turned rust into gold As two came together, truth would be told Smiles were blooming across miles of land Impressions made on ground where they stand A love strong enough, it could never die Was so bright, it lit up the entire sky With each breath taken slowly and words left to say There is this love that no storm can blow away Heidi Sands 4/7/18 *Placed 2nd in the 10 word contest Words Required: Crimson, Forgotten, Grace, Harvest, Love, Misty, Shadow, Shore, Tempest, Yesterday.

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Date: 4/24/2018 7:24:00 AM
Congrats on a fine, optimistic piece, Heidi, well done! Viv x
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Heidi Sands
Date: 4/24/2018 7:59:00 AM
Thank you very much Viv :)
Date: 4/24/2018 1:02:00 AM
Congratulations, Heidi on your win. A beautifully flowing poem.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 4/24/2018 7:59:00 AM
Thank you Subimal :)
Date: 4/23/2018 11:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! This is a beautiful strong poem of love.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 4/23/2018 11:35:00 PM
Thank you Susan. I enjoyed your feedback.:)
Date: 4/23/2018 5:59:00 PM
Wow! Heidi, I don't know how I missed this well written piece. You made good use of the chosen words. The words " Love conquers all" came to mind as I was reading this amazing verse. Congratulations on your winning write. It was well deserved :-) Alexis
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Heidi Sands
Date: 4/23/2018 6:26:00 PM
Oh, Alexis. That is so kind of you to say. I appreciate it very much :)
Date: 4/23/2018 2:13:00 PM
Congrats, Heidi, we both placed, yay !!!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 4/23/2018 6:25:00 PM
Thanks Mike! Yay. I will be heading to yours now ! :)
Date: 4/23/2018 1:39:00 PM
"Love lighting up the sky"...Congrats on your win Heidi..
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Heidi Sands
Date: 4/23/2018 1:44:00 PM
Thank you Joseph :)
Date: 4/9/2018 8:48:00 AM
So Beautiful, Heidi. I especially like " A love strong enough, it could never die' as I truly believe it Good Luck Happy Monday xxoo
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Heidi Sands
Date: 4/9/2018 8:50:00 AM
Thank you Mike. I believe so, too. Happy Monday! :)
Date: 4/8/2018 5:24:00 AM
A ten-word prompt poem skillfully and beautifully written, Heidi. True, strong love is able to weather any storm! ~ Regards // paul
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Heidi Sands
Date: 4/8/2018 7:21:00 AM
Thank you for your kind feedback Paul. I appreciate your comment :)
Date: 4/7/2018 5:12:00 PM
A lovely poem with great flow Heidi, good luck in the contest :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 4/7/2018 5:14:00 PM
Thank you Gary :)
Date: 4/7/2018 2:44:00 PM
A well-written poem...on the spectrum of love...Good one indeed...All the best Heidi
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Heidi Sands
Date: 4/7/2018 2:47:00 PM
Thank you Arturo. I am happy to see your comment :)
Date: 4/7/2018 11:15:00 AM
Well done Heidi--the ten words blend in seamlessly..best for a win.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 4/7/2018 11:17:00 AM
Thank you Vijay! :)

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