With Desires

"with desires"

embrace the touch

to all souls who look to breathe
have the sense of feel be alive
an opening is seeing and hearing
still embark upon the touch itself

embrace the feel

have sensations emerge your being
for without its reach souls sleep
face suns and moons now and always
hold their light a glowing breeze

embrace it all

feeling affects greater heights
make seeing and hearing open wide
such impact will transform us all
allow the soul to wake with desires

SkyWatcher
10-28-22
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Deo Avatar
October 31, 2022 at 7:44 PM
Avoid sleepy souls: all senses to play/ work, keep souls on fire, alive. So true Lady Lisa poetess of Embrace Shalom shalom shalom ThanX, namasthe, Hariom Shanthi, Shanthi, Shanthi Praying hands in Jesus's name, amen
Ricci Avatar
November 1, 2022 at 7:49 AM
Hello Anil. Hi. Thank you ever so much. It is my hope my work and I deserve such a review and commentary. Truly. Yes, keep souls alive. (true true and true again). May this day find you well. Love and Blessings now and always. Shalom Shalom Shalom (smile)
Baker Avatar
October 30, 2022 at 9:02 AM
To embrace life is freeing to the soul, Lisa, I liked the way you expressed your thoughts through this fine poem. It felt good to read it. :-) Smiles ~ Blessings my kind friend. Bill
Ricci Avatar
October 31, 2022 at 3:26 AM
Good Morning Bill. Hi. Thank you ever so much. Your comment enhanced the entry and thought itself. May we all feel free and may we all just feel. That's the bottom line (smile). Have a beautiful morning and day. Blessings back to you, thank you for that as well. Keep enjoying poetrysoup.
Kauffman Avatar
October 28, 2022 at 1:13 PM
Lisa, this poem literally embraces us at our core. How I love a good hug! Thank you for that feeling of being embraced. Blessings!
Ricci Avatar
October 29, 2022 at 12:53 AM
Good Morning Sam. It is I who thanks you for a wonderful review with commentary. Truly. Yes, its all about the sense of feel. Have a wonderful morning. Keep enjoying poetrysoup.
Buhagiar Avatar
October 28, 2022 at 8:20 AM
Who doesn't love an embrace or two occasionally? Lovely poem written with feeling.
Ricci Avatar
October 28, 2022 at 9:47 AM
Thank you very much Victor. Hi. Its all about the feel. The feel of it all. I"m glad you liked the entry. Truly. Have a wonderful and peaceful night. Love and Blessings now and always. (smile)
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