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With a Love That Will Never Die

In the dark of night I come to you, with a passion and need on fire; and my words are just a whisper, my darling, do you feel my desire. In front of you I stand full of weakness, my fingers stroke your handsome face; I love you, I will love only you forever, with a love that will never die. Hold me in your arms secret lover, until the sun in the blue sky is no more; and the moon has grown tired and old, and the book written of our life on earth is revealed ! Look into my eyes and see my deep love, my lust and my agony and pain; let us lie here in the moonlight, sweet lover, and forget the problems of this twisted life. Let our hands soothe all worries away, and with the heat of our burning kisses; soon our hearts and souls will become one, with a love that will never die. Hold me in your arms secret lover, until the sun in the blue sky is no more; and the moon has grown tired and old, and the book written of our life on earth is revealed ! _________________________ September 17, 2017 Verse/With A Love That Will Never Die Copyright Protected, ID 940458 Written for the contest, Hold Me In Your Arms sponsor, Julie Rodeheaver First Place
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Roper Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 6:14 PM
Congratulations on your win, Broken Wings , very enchanting Eve ~`*
Lane Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 12:47 PM
It's my turn to congratulate you on also winning a first place in Julie's contest. This one is a revelation of love, Constance.
Webster Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 12:45 PM
congratulations, Broken Wings.
Pandit Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 6:27 AM
Congrats BW on your BIG win--such a delightful poem!!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 11:14 PM
Congratulations, Constance. A superb love poem.
Tor Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 11:05 PM
Congratulations Constance, on this passionate write.
Canerdy Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 9:43 PM
Sweetly emotional and beautiful, Constance. Congrats! Janice
Rodrigues Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 9:33 PM
Great passion, Constance! Congrats!
Ajmal Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 9:56 AM
A really beautiful write, I enjoyed reading it from begginning till the end, especially the line " and he moon has grown tired and old, and the book written of our life on earth is revealed" this will certainly be my favourite line of this poem
Pigeon Tart Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 9:05 AM
A rich piece lovely, potent xomo
Hamilton Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 8:44 PM
Wonderful writing Constance, very lyrical I believe you have another winner here!
Ashley Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 7:15 PM
Brilliant write Broken Wings. I really like the repetition of the last five lines in both stanzas-- poetically powerful!
Sivey Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 5:27 PM
This is such a brilliant and awe inspiring write my friend! I surely loved reading this outstanding and remarkable poem this evening! What a lovely piece, heartfelt and true! Great Work!!
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September 17, 2017 at 3:31 PM
Interesting piece Constance, good imagery too! Have blessed day Gordon
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