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With a Constant Draft

She's in quite deep with out a doubt, a very cramped space to pull her out. She slipped into a loneliness well, a cold sad place for one to dwell. There were times when she was reaching out but no one heard her pained shout. She couldn't recall days of glory, stayed focused in her sad life story. It's oh so dark with a constant draft, deep inside her mind's shaft.

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Date: 2/20/2021 2:04:00 PM
This is a very well thought out piece depicting the depth of one's depression. The pain of depression is very real and people who have never experienced it don't understand and have trouble feeling for these people. Good job here. It is like being trapped at the bottom of a well. God Bless, JB
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