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Three busy witches stood stirring a stew Cauldron filled with freaky things for a brew Each Halloween they made soup in their escapade Adding ingredients to a brown roux Jan, of course, as she always wants to do added a bouquet garni of fresh poo She said, "It's for flavour! A taste that I favour." There's no tellin' where she got it? No clue Tania, from the north is witch number two Stardust into the black cauldron, she threw It made the others sneeze Lin, witch three shouted, "Geeze!" She exclaimed when in her face, stardust blew The scents were mingling in the kitchen, Phew! Some poet shouted, "Open the damn flue!" The kitchen got too hot From flames under the pot Suddenly, a clock began to chime… CUCKOO "I'll lower the heat so it doesn't spew." Tania, the prudent said because she knew Jan and Lin were laughing Bantering and chaffing Sometimes she'd like to tell those two to shoo! Jan sliced the snout of what looked like a shrew Lin poured in vials of green stuff... jou jou? The brew started boiling While they were still toiling “Quick! Let's serve it before it turns to goo!” Their brew was served to all the poets, who said it seemed like someone made a boo-boo The witches weren't upset Twas their best prank yet Soupers were cursed with Halloween voodoo Some began to fly; in circles they flew Others wailed with salty tears, oh boo hoo The witches felt regret They grew sad, but not yet... Did they break the spell till fell morning dew

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Date: 11/5/2023 5:41:00 PM
Oh Lin! What a great string of limericks and a scary story of witches in the soup. Love it! :))
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Date: 11/3/2023 7:54:00 PM
Brilliant Limericks for Halloween Lin, I hope no souper grew sick supping your brew… Belle
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/4/2023 10:12:00 AM
Thanks so much, Belle.
Date: 11/3/2023 4:20:00 AM
You were really into the spirit of halloween Lin, this is gold and I nearly missed it. Great writing, you never disappoint us. Tom
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Date: 11/3/2023 4:27:00 AM
I was watching Hocus Pocus and thought of the three of us. We’ve been accused of being mean girls but only by those who have the facts backwards. Thanks, Tom. Maybe we’ll get together and brew a Thanksgiving meal. Lol
Date: 10/30/2023 3:12:00 PM
A masterclass of rhyming Limericks Lin, damn you make them look so effortless to write, I guess I’m one of those soupers flying high after reading your halloween hijinks, best looking coven of witches I’ve ever seen lol, captcha spt, ok which one of you did spt in the brew, brilliant cheers David
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/1/2023 6:21:00 AM
It's a toss up for me. Depends or whether or not I'm in the mood for chopped nuts or smashed ones. lol That sounds a titch strange.
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David Kavanagh
Date: 10/31/2023 7:02:00 AM
Snickers all the time Lin, there’s something about all the nuts!
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Lin Lane
Date: 10/31/2023 5:59:00 AM
Hi David. Thank you. I love the sarcasm of Limericks. I feel like I should be handing out candy to everyone who comments. Lol. Snickers or Reese’s peanut butter cups?
Date: 10/30/2023 11:04:00 AM
What a fun read this is, Lin. Showing off your playful side:) Not sure what kind of soup it is but I think I'll skip to the dessert:) Happy Halloween!
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Lin Lane
Date: 10/31/2023 5:57:00 AM
Morning, Danny. It’s the kind of soup that only the wicked should be served. It’s not for you!! Have some of my apple pie instead. Thanks!
Date: 10/30/2023 10:51:00 AM
So hysterical, Lin, and very fun! Such a treat without the tricks! Sending you blessings with a smile!
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Date: 10/31/2023 5:54:00 AM
Lol Sam. Thanks for your comments. They’re a treat for me.
Date: 10/30/2023 9:42:00 AM
An uplifting Halloween poem. So funny, I did smile. Thank you.
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Date: 10/31/2023 5:54:00 AM
Thanks for finding the humor in it, Hilda.
Date: 10/30/2023 7:49:00 AM
lol Lin thanks for including me in the halloween howler! hugs han xx
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Date: 10/31/2023 5:53:00 AM
There you are! I can’t do Hocus Pokus without you and Tania.. well maybe sometimes
Date: 10/30/2023 1:37:00 AM
WOW, Lin, what a great Limerick for the Halloween season. I'm sure Tania and Jan will get a thrill out of this one. Thanks for the fun! Bill
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Date: 10/30/2023 6:28:00 AM
Tania did and Jan doesn’t know about it yet. She’s MIA this morning. Thanks very much, Bill.
Date: 10/29/2023 4:33:00 PM
a delightful creation and a fun read. I assume your characters were Poetry Soup folks...that makes it even better.
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Date: 10/30/2023 6:27:00 AM
They are none other than the three of us chicks… errr witches Until Wednesday. Lol thanks, Sara.
Date: 10/29/2023 4:32:00 PM
Yikes! If ever you throw a dinner party… I’ll have a pressing engagement… I mean, snout of shrew? It’s enough to turn me vegan! Wicked Halloween verses, Lin.
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Date: 11/3/2023 4:29:00 AM
You’re safe with us, Terry. You’re one of the good guys who knows we’re not the mean ones.
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Terry Flood
Date: 11/1/2023 6:13:00 PM
Crikey… I’m not sure I have that much to spare… hmmm… I dunno though.., ;-)
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Lin Lane
Date: 10/30/2023 6:26:00 AM
You’ll show up if you’re invited or something that goes into our next brew will a part of you! Thanks, Terry
Date: 10/29/2023 2:58:00 PM
Lin, ha ha, I love this, so fun and creative, thank you for including me!
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Date: 10/29/2023 3:38:00 PM
We had a little Hocus Pocus of our own going on. Haha. Glad you like it.
Date: 10/29/2023 1:37:00 PM
Lin, this is a riot, and a limerick and mono-rhyme combo masterpiece! How fun, and impressive.
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Date: 10/29/2023 3:37:00 PM
I am SO glad you enjoyed it, David. Thanks for recognizing the forms!
Date: 10/29/2023 1:22:00 PM
What a fun Limerick write/story/picture. Watch out what you drink, it could be from a witches brew. Have a wonderful day.......
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Lin Lane
Date: 10/29/2023 3:36:00 PM
Lol Paula. Thanks for liking this one!

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