Witch

She cast her spells with words in rhyme And turns a prince into a frog From his castle he disappears And now he croaks upon a log! She seeks the youthful looks she once had And puts a princess in deep sleep In either case a kiss is needed To break the spell that runs so deep On Halloween her cauldron boils With a brew she knows so well She flies across the moonlit sky Ready to cast her magic spell ~

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Brandy Nicole

Date: 8/16/2023 7:10:00 PM

That Wicked Witch is always Casting Crazy spells. Perhaps, she'll meet her match, and he'll change her into something Creepy. It's that time of year again, for haunting poems. My best to you, Joseph. Hugs, Brandy

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/16/2023 12:17:00 PM

Back with congratulations. I enjoyed reading your creative/fun write again. Have a great/fun day writing away...........

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/16/2023 12:14:00 PM

- Back to congratulate you on your win, Joseph :) - hugs

Silent One

Date: 8/16/2023 9:47:00 AM

You summed up witches really well here... nice rhymes my friend.. Hope all is well..

Christuraj Alex

Date: 8/16/2023 7:49:00 AM

"On Halloween her cauldron boils With a brew she knows so well" - Beautiful. Congratulations!

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/16/2023 6:09:00 AM

Joseph, your imagery is consistently exceptional. Your writing is impressively crafted, my friend. Congratulations on your outstanding Win.

Ink Empress

Date: 8/15/2023 10:47:00 AM

Usually they change a frog into a prince but this spell seems dark and creatively poignant. Excellent write i truly enjoyed reading. Loving those internal rhymes too. My favorite line is the opening. Words in rhymes as spells. Intriguing

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/15/2023 9:16:00 AM

- A lot can change with a kiss, Joseph ... :))) - A lovely poem - Witches exist all year round not just on Halloween - GL in the contest :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/15/2023 8:45:00 AM

Oh I loved this thought Halloween is far away. Best for the contest.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/15/2023 12:27:00 AM

Already the shops here are selling halloween outfits and slimy stuff lol. Tom

Valsa George

Date: 8/14/2023 9:37:00 PM

Hope we won't fall under her spell ! Imagine we being turned into some loathsome creatures! Enjoyed your poem with references to the fairy tales, dear Joseph!

Akkina Downing

Date: 8/14/2023 7:38:00 PM

That witch who is very much disliked by every little girl. Including big girls like me. Lol. A fun and lovely write, Joseph. I Very much enjoyed it :)

Tom Woody

Date: 8/14/2023 4:41:00 PM

The least she could have done was turn him into a stallion, or a lion, but a frog? Humiliating

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/14/2023 2:29:00 PM

You described her perfectly, Joseph. She is a magical presence in many stories, as you so well illustrate.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/14/2023 1:57:00 PM

A creative/fun write. A fun read. "Good Luck" You are early just like the stores. Hahaha!!! Have a great day.............

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/14/2023 1:12:00 PM

Your poem is truly delightful, Joseph. I am always pleased by your choice of words. Wishing you the best of luck in the contest.