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Wistful Sunset Surrender

Violaceous twilights, clandestinely sated lavished 'til morn's early blush midst honey suckled euphoria, poetry hidden 'neath silken pillowcases, written 'tween the dew of rendezvous' blissed arousal evermore eagerly breathless, reawakening intentions aloft the vast obscurity of a wistfully surrendered sunset

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 11/3/2016 12:13:00 AM
seductively alluring !
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Date: 11/2/2016 10:36:00 PM
well now, this oughta be illegal! WoW WoW WoW (hey, that's a palindrome) Anyways, triple wows means good stuff. Lines 7,8,9 sizzle!
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Date: 10/7/2016 5:58:00 PM
Very nice....
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Paloma P
Date: 10/7/2016 9:07:00 PM
Many thanks...
Date: 10/7/2016 8:00:00 AM
It might be nice to see one of those sunsets with you:) I'd let you describe it to me while we watched. Very eloquent, Paloma.
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Paloma P
Date: 10/7/2016 8:06:00 AM
Oh I'm not half as nice as my poetry. 'laughing here' thanks for your thoughts. ;)
Date: 10/7/2016 7:11:00 AM
I am always enchanted when I come to your page. Your words gather before my eyes like a warm summer day, always leaving me wanting more. You have created a twilight like I have never seen before. This is absolutely beautiful
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Paloma P
Date: 10/7/2016 7:26:00 AM
Oh, you're making my head swoon, thanks so much Chris!
Date: 10/7/2016 6:57:00 AM
Very beautiful! Life can be a joy, can't it, if one does more feeling and less explaining.... The option to be happy and prosperous is a thought away--and needed then only a pen and paper to write such perfect experience as poetry to relive for self and others through eternity. Another context of the Living Word.
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Paloma P
Date: 10/7/2016 7:24:00 AM
Thank you kindly for such a poetic critique, I much appreciate your thoughts Joe.

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