Paloma P Poet Free verse

Wistful Sunset Surrender

Violaceous twilights, 
      clandestinely sated 
lavished 'til morn's early blush
     midst honey suckled euphoria,
 poetry hidden 'neath 
         silken pillowcases,
written 'tween the dew 
    of rendezvous' 
       blissed arousal
evermore eagerly breathless,
      reawakening intentions
  aloft the vast obscurity of
     a wistfully surrendered sunset

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Just James November 3, 2016 at 12:13 AM seductively alluring !

Lim'Rik Flats November 2, 2016 at 10:36 PM well now, this oughta be illegal! WoW WoW WoW (hey, that's a palindrome) Anyways, triple wows means good stuff. Lines 7,8,9 sizzle!

Pashang Salehi October 7, 2016 at 5:58 PM Very nice.... Paloma P October 7, 2016 at 9:07 PM Many thanks...

Daniel Turner October 7, 2016 at 8:00 AM It might be nice to see one of those sunsets with you:) I'd let you describe it to me while we watched. Very eloquent, Paloma. Paloma P October 7, 2016 at 8:06 AM Oh I'm not half as nice as my poetry. 'laughing here' thanks for your thoughts. ;)

Chris Green October 7, 2016 at 7:11 AM I am always enchanted when I come to your page. Your words gather before my eyes like a warm summer day, always leaving me wanting more. You have created a twilight like I have never seen before. This is absolutely beautiful Paloma P October 7, 2016 at 7:26 AM Oh, you're making my head swoon, thanks so much Chris!

Joseph P. DiMino October 7, 2016 at 6:57 AM Very beautiful! Life can be a joy, can't it, if one does more feeling and less explaining.... The option to be happy and prosperous is a thought away--and needed then only a pen and paper to write such perfect experience as poetry to relive for self and others through eternity. Another context of the Living Word. Paloma P October 7, 2016 at 7:24 AM Thank you kindly for such a poetic critique, I much appreciate your thoughts Joe.