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Wishing the Impossible

Do not be surprised. I do not live, I exist. I just bear a weary future. I fear not death Now that you’re gone. The horizon is far away and dark. I wake at two in the morning. The waning moon is ebony, just a sliver. Dark clouds obscure the little light. Yet I find no comfort in silence. Dawn soon comes. The trees are there Birds nestle in them. Below a soft breeze scatters seed, For life must go on. I plod on until….. The sky clears. The sea is calm. And some Venus In a skimpy bikini Lies on the sand, Sunbathing. Who cares about death? Perhaps it has taken a holiday.

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Date: 1/26/2021 2:51:00 PM
Very emotional write, Victor. The Venus came along at the perfect time to distract you from your thoughts. Hope you have a great night :)
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Date: 1/26/2021 7:08:00 AM
Life goes on. During our life time we laugh and love and grieve. We miss those who go on to their final reward before we are ready to lose them. But we must go one to finish the job God has intended for us. What sustains us is the knowledge that one day we will see again our loved ones. Great job here my friend. God Bless and keep you, JB
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Date: 1/25/2021 10:04:00 AM
No doubt, some venus did catch your eye as it would most gentlemen, but as I've mentioned before, your guardian angel will tell you and come and take your hand as you walk towards a brilliant light. We all die, but a venus, now how can you resist another peep! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 1/25/2021 7:45:00 AM
- I have met many people with your wish, Victor :) - It is not impossible ... we are all going to die ... but your time has not come yet - One day ... your loved one will stand in the gate ... and wait for a kiss :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/24/2021 8:49:00 PM
This is tender and emotional, all at the same time. You create some humor within, to lighten the mood. Your thoughts caress gently around me and my heart. ~ Brandy
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Date: 1/24/2021 6:56:00 PM
This is wonderful poetry Victor, Need to visit that beach..
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Date: 1/24/2021 5:56:00 PM
A verse with emotion and imagery, Victor, we miss the ones we love and stop fearing death because of it. Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/24/2021 2:08:00 PM
Very descriptive and expressive work. Enjoyed reading it today. I guess a girl in a bikini changed everything for you. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 1/24/2021 1:38:00 PM
so much emotion in your lines Victor, I know how much you miss your dear Liliane but life does go on:-) I had to smile at the ending I can picture the ladies on the beach catching a man's eye :-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/24/2021 1:07:00 PM
That was really cool how you ended with the bikini lady. let those thoughts of death go on vacation!!
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Date: 1/24/2021 7:59:00 AM
Great imagery Victor with some emotions and finally a positive note. God bless. ~ Ani
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Date: 1/24/2021 7:08:00 AM
Waiting for death is to ignore life, which you do not. All the gems of your poetry read. God will take all of us at some point. You are a joy to read! Love your final verse. LOL
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Date: 1/24/2021 6:07:00 AM
Hi Victor, You have penned such a well written melancholy write. You expressed loneliness and loss very well. I enjoyed the positive shift and change of direction in the last portion of your poem. Well done. Have a great day, my friend:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/24/2021 5:50:00 AM
Beautiful images you painted of your hues in the early morning, Victor. The ending stanza magnifies why life is worth living. Enjoyed this feeling you gave to aging.
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Date: 1/24/2021 4:48:00 AM
The moon sinks...the brighter rises. Off your chest. Watching not the horizon, but the next step so it isn’t missed. A write of passion. Wishing u coming marvelous times.Many blessings to u, Victor!
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Date: 1/24/2021 3:51:00 AM
wonderful writing... God bless you my friend, with many joy filled days... and abundant life. Love and prayers
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Date: 1/24/2021 3:18:00 AM
Victor, a wonderful poem, I can feel the emotions and the loss in your words and like the hopeful ending! Hugs
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Date: 1/23/2021 10:32:00 PM
...your write brought an unwrit idea to mind....it was with respect rain and a dragon fly on my window....'when all else has been eliminated what remains is the true path'....the dragon fly stayed...andt after the rain a swarm of dragons settled in the garden devouring a swarm of flying ants......stan sand
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