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How I wish you knew ... Do you know? Do you realize how beautiful you are? Do you notice the people whose heads spin as you pass? Do you feel ANY worth after he's done with you? I watch you walk past each day as I sip cappuccino A new bruise or cut or burn or limp Sometimes a black eye under your sunglasses Oh, how I wish I could give you strength to leave him It seems so simple to me, to just ... go Just wish him to hell and leave the monster for good Easy to say, but I'm not the one at the business end Of those fists and boots and belts ... and slurs It's not fair to expect it, but I pray just the same Each day I pray ... and smile at you You always return it, but tentative and shy As though he's there ... watching Oh, you are worth SO much more than you realize So brave, to gift me that smile each day Such courage it takes for those stares and comments at work Such courage to face him at the end of every day Perhaps you wonder why I don't speak ... say hi Sometimes I wonder that as well But I think perhaps ... just perhaps You are MUCH more brave ... Than I am. ~ 10th Place ~ in the "What Are Your Wishes" Poetry Contest, Chantelle Anne Cooke, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 1/24/2020 8:46:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/25/2020 1:57:00 PM
Many kind thanks to you, Beata, I so appreciate the wonderful comments! Blessings! :-) <3
Date: 1/24/2020 12:21:00 AM
Congratulations, Greg on your win. The wishes and the sentiments are so true and relevant.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/25/2020 1:57:00 PM
That's very kind of you, Subimal - thank you so much, my friend! :o)
Date: 1/23/2020 11:55:00 PM
A stunning write in so many ways. Congrats on your win, Gregory.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/25/2020 1:56:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Line! :o) <3
Date: 1/23/2020 11:35:00 PM
Such an important subject highlighting abuse. Your wish written not for yourself but for another hurting soul. I hope you will put this to music. Now I know why your poems flow with meter. They are like lyrics! I know because I am also a musician - songwriter! Congratulations!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 1/25/2020 2:06:00 PM
When time permits will go to your website to listen to your music. I wanted to share with you my website - samkservantsheart.com. The music can also be heard at cdbaby.com. Also, so wonderful to know the subject of your piece is finally free!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/25/2020 1:56:00 PM
Thank you so much, My Music Brother, this comment means a lot to me, as does the subject matter - I have someone close to me who has been kept in fear for much of her life, but is finally being freed from it. Blessings! :o)
Date: 1/23/2020 1:53:00 PM
Gregory congrats on your win!;)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/25/2020 1:54:00 PM
Thank you so much, Brenda! :o) <3
Date: 1/23/2020 1:27:00 PM
The consideration of human kindness is the greatest wish of all! Love this Greg! Lonna
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/25/2020 1:54:00 PM
You are so correct, Lonna - thank you, Dear Poet! :o) <3

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