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Poetry/Shape/Wish I Was A Bird
Copyright Protected, ID 11-1597-722-14
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written, November 14, 2023
For the International Contest, No. 1258
Sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 11/17/2023

Third Place

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I wish that I was a bird flying high above dipping and diving. Singing a song, a melody sweet drifting down, touching the earth with love lifting a spirit. I would spin and twirl, whirling in the sunshine, and float on a breeze with ease. There would be no fear of crashing down. Oh yes, I would be full of great happiness, strength and courage I would love my filigree feathers fluttering, white and wispy, so delicate yet strong. I would plummet downward and sing my song loudly, come fly today, fly fly, fly, fly up high and would sing while flying, flying soaring on the wind. Gliding and falling, drifting, twirling, whirling down, then, up high, high.

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Date: 11/18/2023 9:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement. I enjoyed reading this. Well deserved
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Constance La France
Date: 11/19/2023 4:43:00 PM
Ink, thank you so much for the congratulations, blessings
Date: 11/18/2023 7:08:00 AM
Amazing poem and form. Congratulations on your placement!
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Constance La France
Date: 11/19/2023 4:43:00 PM
Karen, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, blessings
Date: 11/15/2023 11:17:00 AM
Love it : ). Amazes me how you put these together, the time spent is very much appreciated and shows, : )
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Constance La France
Date: 11/15/2023 7:53:00 PM
Stephan, thank you so much for the compliment and comment, shape poems are not easy that is for sure, blessings
Date: 11/14/2023 11:50:00 PM
Ah now im singing the song “ im like a bird” and also “i believe i can fly” i wonder how it would be to be able to fly really. Exhilarating i suppose as i hate heights. I love the shape you are so artistic. So good! You are truly a talented soul, ill fave this one
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Constance La France
Date: 11/15/2023 7:54:00 PM
Ink, thank you so much for the comment, compliment on my poem and writing and for the FAV, blessings
Date: 11/14/2023 3:54:00 PM
Very lovely poem!
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Constance La France
Date: 11/15/2023 7:55:00 PM
Abdullah, thank you so much for the compliment, blessings
Date: 11/14/2023 3:35:00 PM
This is a beautiful poem dear Constance and visually stunning. Incredibly creative. I’ve often watched birds in flight and thought the same. I love the sense and joy of freedom here. The lines,’ touching the earth with love’ ‘ lifting a spirit’ really stood out for me. Really enjoyed this rather clever shape poem- there’s nothing that you can’t write! Good luck in the contest. Hugs and smiles to you xx
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Constance La France
Date: 11/15/2023 7:56:00 PM
Christina, thank you so much for the compliment on my poem and writing, and encouragement, hugs and blessings

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