Wish I Knew You When I Was Young

Wish I knew you when I was young Wish I knew you when I was young When journey of my desires had just begun As lyrics of my romantic life were being written And the song of my rhythm remained unsung. As I encountered my dream of unknown theme No one ever resembled your state of elegance, Not knowing the pathway to worthy eloquence I embarked on a course of least resistance. Why do I feel so attracted to your presence Mesmerized by your utmost shiny luminance As you stand there gazing my lone appearance Unaware that I'm already married to a gentleman. Yet, I stay engaged in the game of hide and seek Following your vibes to take a stolen peek As you pause to shake hands with a firm grip When I clumsily inform you my feelings run deep. I decided to meet you knowing nothing about you For urge tugged fervor unlike anything I knew Getting lost in fables that seldom come true Seeking refuge in secret wishes patently new. And I felt playful as we stopped by for ice cream Travelling back to days when life was carefree Telling you coyly about my husband and children Crossing norms of naivety with a reckless abandon. You said goodbye as anguish flared your wistful eyes Retreating hastily upon hearing my hesitant sigh And I let go of your grip on my wanting sheen Fascinating in solitude how things might have been. November 22, 2017 Wish I knew you when I was young Sponsor: Julie Leigh Rodeheaver First Place

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Date: 12/22/2023 6:35:00 AM
Congratulations on this winner from a while ago. I enjoyed reading it today. Thank you for sharing this flirtatious one with us and for dropping by my pages. Sara K
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Date: 5/18/2022 9:25:00 PM
"Yet, I stay engaged in the game of hide and seek/ Following your vibes to take a stolen peek/ As you pause to shake hands with a firm grip/ When I clumsily inform you my feelings run deep/" Beautiful lines..... Lovely poem so befitting to the theme ! So beautifully done. This into my FAV
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Date: 12/4/2017 8:48:00 AM
Wonderful write Vijay.....full of emotions.
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Date: 12/3/2017 7:03:00 AM
Congratulations, Vijay on your win.
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Date: 11/28/2017 8:28:00 AM
Magnificent Vijay; Such passion expressed yet playful as well. A splendid and elegantly written piece; I love the last stanza. Good luck in the contest.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/28/2017 8:37:00 AM
Thank you Edward!
Date: 11/27/2017 8:26:00 AM
Awww. Hits me right to the core. Very eloquently written, you're a master of language and sentiments. Beautiful!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/27/2017 9:23:00 AM
Thank you Rhoda!
Date: 11/23/2017 3:21:00 AM
Excellent wistful write. Well penned. Good luck in the contest.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/23/2017 6:41:00 AM
Thank you Ravi!
Date: 11/23/2017 12:09:00 AM
Such a wonderful poem the flow is great, Vijay, good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/23/2017 6:41:00 AM
Thank you Eve!
Date: 11/22/2017 1:22:00 PM
Well spoken! GL in contest, my friend!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/22/2017 4:41:00 PM
Thanks Kim!
Date: 11/22/2017 12:54:00 PM
wow, this is really nicely conveyed, Vijay. There is a song. Something like: hard to belong to someone else when the right one comes along. This really made me feel the way that song used to make me feel so long ago!! Best of luck in the contest
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/22/2017 1:18:00 PM
Many thanks Andrea!
Date: 11/22/2017 12:33:00 PM
Such a beautiful "missed by a twist of fate" love poem, Vijay. You use such intricate emotional POV interplay within societal bounds of acceptable behavior. A fine line walked w/a tightrope acrobat's pen. Your poetic talent never ceases to amaze me. Another fave coming thru the queue. Love and smiles always.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/22/2017 1:18:00 PM
Many thanks Freddie!
Date: 11/22/2017 11:30:00 AM
Vijay, your high standards as usual, has produced a beautifully expressed romantic write full of fantastic lines of rhyme, thoughts and imagery. Quite lovely and enjoyed! Good luck int he contest!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/22/2017 1:17:00 PM
Appreciate your comments Susan--thank you!
Date: 11/22/2017 11:12:00 AM
Lovely wistful write Vijay. Really enjoyed being wrapped into this story. Best of luck in the contest!! Best, Judy
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/22/2017 1:17:00 PM
Thank you Judy!
Date: 11/22/2017 10:39:00 AM
Intriguing, without a doubt...Fiction, maybe...but written with a touch of reality... Nice work Vijay...All the best my friend
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/22/2017 1:16:00 PM
Many thank Arturo!
Date: 11/22/2017 8:28:00 AM
Wish we knew you when you were young too Vijay...great 'romantic' write my friend...god bless...^WW^
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/22/2017 8:36:00 AM
Thank you WW! This is fiction!
Date: 11/22/2017 7:30:00 AM
Beautifully expressed for the contest Vijay. The reader can feel it. I like the line: the song of my rhythm remained unsung. It also has a superb ending line :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/22/2017 8:35:00 AM
Many thanks Heidi--appreciate your thoughtful comments!
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