Wish For Acceptance

My greatest wish is for humanity
Treating each other with civility
Regardless of each one’s ethnicity
All men should be treated with dignity
 
For when I hear of discrimination
It generates the greatest repulsion
And so as not to create confusion
Every religion deserves inclusion
 
Judging books by their covers can only bring
More hate, intolerance as hope takes wing
If we could learn to be more accepting
Bells of world peace would surely be chiming
 
So join me now in prayer for acceptance
And an end to widespread intolerance
Beyond war there will be a transcendence
Through God’s plan we’ll live in benevolence
 
 
 
*Entry for Kristen’s “If I had one wish” contest
By Carolyn Devonshire

(Thanks for reading.  No comments needed.  Will be away on vacation for the next 
week and unable to return the favor.  Have a wonderful Memorial Day holiday!)
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Narain Avatar
April 24, 2023 at 11:00 AM
Nice
Mister Roboto Avatar
June 12, 2011 at 1:29 PM
7
Mister Roboto Avatar
June 12, 2011 at 1:29 PM
7
Mister Roboto Avatar
June 12, 2011 at 1:30 PM
oops...musta sent twice.
Mister Roboto Avatar
June 12, 2011 at 1:28 PM
well I agree quite a bit with this rhyme. i speak of these forms of intolerance on a day to day basis. people should not judge harshly each other, based upon religious beliefs or most any reason. now if someone tries to hurt my family or loved ones...imma get a tid bit ghetto on 'em. LoL.....took your advice again on the "stones" contest. i hope he does not disqualify me bc of the 8 line rule....?
Fraser Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 1:28 PM
Many congratulations Carolyn on your win in Kristen's contest. Have a lovely evening :)
Song Avatar
June 3, 2011 at 12:49 PM
Yes! Carolyn is baaaaaaack!! Hope your time was a spiritual renewal and free of sunburn. I believe you just poured out your soul to write this one. It is pure and amazing....as tho written by a wise young owl. ha ha. Congrats on hosting a fun to read contest.. I will email u the toils of myself writing 2 poems for your contest...one was a charbroilled jew fish epularyu..I just got writer's block. Hugs..glad u are home safe!
Poet Avatar
June 3, 2011 at 6:22 AM
Congrats Carolyn...I liked it 1st time around...
Brown Avatar
June 3, 2011 at 4:54 AM
Congratulations on your win in Kristen's contest Carolyn. Hoping you have caught the big one by now my friend. Missing you. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
June 3, 2011 at 4:45 AM
My Congratulations on the win in the contest of kristen, Carolyn
Villanueva Avatar
June 2, 2011 at 6:59 PM
CONGRATULATIONS!!! really wonderful... well-deserved.. thumbs up for your win.... ***jun-jun
Culverhouse Avatar
June 2, 2011 at 4:21 PM
enjoyed reading your work....my head says one thing and my heart is in contrast.
Neels Avatar
June 2, 2011 at 11:13 AM
I really love this wish of yours Carolyn.. Imagine the possibilities ;) hope you are enjoying your vacation.. Good luck for the contest.. Love you - Wilma
Piyush Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 4:43 AM
good thinking...keep writing..
Merritt Avatar
May 31, 2011 at 9:58 PM
Hit stuff, humble wish, good work tho, I like it.
Loving Iii Avatar
May 31, 2011 at 2:58 PM
that wish ... away on vacation! what!
Hendricks Avatar
May 29, 2011 at 3:07 AM
You're asking us not to comment on a highly commendable poem. Come on!! This is real poetry and not to be side-stepped. Good luck in the contest, Carolyn.
Mitchell Jr. Avatar
May 27, 2011 at 1:11 PM
Amen to that! What a woderful write indeed.
Horne Avatar
May 27, 2011 at 11:36 AM
Yes, if only everyone believed in 'live and let live.' Hope you have a great trip, my friend - and catch plenty of swordfish!
Foulk Avatar
May 27, 2011 at 11:09 AM
i have to comment on this beautiful piece you wrote, you don't have to return the favor as i enjoyed reading this wonderful poem. thank you for commenting on Brandy Girl, yes she is a great sweet little dog who i love very much. good luck in the contest
Larocca Avatar
May 27, 2011 at 7:47 AM
What a great wish to have. Hopefully more people will begin to feel this way.
Zzzzz Avatar
May 27, 2011 at 3:36 AM
Noble thoughts, which any decent human being would wish to echo. A good, considered write, Carolyn. Should do well in the contest. Have a great fishing trip...hope you catch some BIG ones! Kind regards, Robert.
Seraphin Avatar
May 26, 2011 at 10:39 PM
* “We Are The Children * We Are The World * Beautiful Song of Hope * Love * Acceptance & Peace * Dear Gifted & Beautiful Carolyn. * Enjoy Your Beauties Vacation & Holiday Dear * Hugs & Kissses * Kissses & Hugs * Always & Forever * Sarah” *
Locksley Avatar
May 26, 2011 at 8:29 PM
We like to think discrimination is part of the past but it still goes on today. Religious differences often lead to war. I hope your wish comes true during my lifetime. Good luck in Kristen's contest. Best to you, Diane
Mehta Avatar
May 26, 2011 at 6:03 PM
Very selfless wish you have, carolyn
Poet Avatar
May 26, 2011 at 5:14 PM
A great wish you have in your mind Carolyn...enjoyed your poem.....Kash
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