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Wish Boat

WISH BOAT my wish boat rushes away in the swift spring creek, I'm keeping it in sight as long as possible, just like when I was a little boy Dad taught me how to make boats from stuff you could find on the riverbank bark twigs vines acorns and pine cones for ballast you needed your pocketknife to carve it just right! (all the boys in my neighborhood carried pocketknives!) excitement, pride and a little sadness, all mixed together, as I watched my boat sail away, wondering, where it's journey will take it. the whole idea of a wish boat is the secrecy of your wish, making your wish come true. well..... I guess there's no chance of my wish coming true, Dad's been gone a little over a year now, ..... and he's not comin' back

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Date: 10/3/2009 6:25:00 AM
Congrats James, making the semi-finals, good luck!! Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 10/2/2009 12:16:00 PM
JMG, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul
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Date: 9/27/2009 5:12:00 AM
Congratulations James! This is such beautiful, touching poetry. Love your creative display, too! Best of luck in the finals! Love, Robin
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Date: 9/25/2009 2:21:00 PM
Congrats!! Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 9/25/2009 7:00:00 AM
Mr. Goff,..congratulations on your first round entry on a fantastic poem ! james
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Date: 9/25/2009 5:54:00 AM
Dear James, Best wishes through to the next round. Lainie
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Date: 9/25/2009 5:48:00 AM
Touching verse to make your WIN with...my Dad's still here..Mom's gone..but always with me in my heart. Light & Love & Congrad's
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Date: 9/24/2009 3:41:00 PM
Congratulations James, on this touching poem making into the 2nd round!! ~ good luck!! love, Carrie
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Date: 9/24/2009 12:34:00 PM
Dear James, Congratulations on being in the round-one finals! Love you, Carolyn
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Date: 9/24/2009 12:04:00 PM
James, congratulations in getting past round one of the competition >> James
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Date: 9/24/2009 10:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round Jim.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/1/2009 9:34:00 AM
Sad but a tribute to Dad. I've been lucky. Even with his cancer as a child and his drinking and carrying on all his life, at 89, I still have him with me. This one was a reminder of what a blessing that is. Vince
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Date: 5/3/2009 7:08:00 AM
This is a beautiful tribute to your Dad, well written, it speaks of pride, of love, of sadness, yes, me too, I wish, my Dad could come back, but my Dad is watching over me from heaven, and I bet your Dad is looking down at you also, and they are smiling. I am happy you enjoyed my poem Dads Work shed, Ihave another I wrote about my Dad, called, I Promise, you might enjoy.
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Date: 4/21/2009 11:56:00 AM
my dads left me and my mom when i was 3 and so say be died in mexico but i believe we'll all be together again sumday
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Date: 4/5/2009 1:07:00 PM
Oh Sweetheart, this is so sad. wonderfully written, it reaches out and tugs the reader's heart strings. love, Helen
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Date: 3/26/2009 3:41:00 PM
very excellently expressed! and may I say the love our parents give us, then teach us things as these... never ends, it moves on through the rest of our lives, the essence of your father will always return to you in moments of need. Appologies if I went too deep within my comment. I was very moved by your work here today. Best regards, Lucinda
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Date: 3/24/2009 4:06:00 PM
Had to revisit one of my favorites here and share it with a friend. You brought tears to our eyes. This is truly magnificent!
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Date: 3/23/2009 9:40:00 AM
touching, and the flow perfect :)--this poem will keep him in your heart-
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Date: 3/23/2009 7:10:00 AM
Jim, I rewind, because the shape of the poem is the container of a powerful content. This poem shows you listening to the sweet voice of inspiration. Good!
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Date: 3/21/2009 5:40:00 PM
Beautifully done James! Very touching.."he's not comin' back". However, those moments you shared will always be with you. Wishing you and yours the best...Mikki
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Date: 3/21/2009 10:53:00 AM
Not comin' back...SO POWERFULLY STATED!~ I am so touched by your words in this poem. You are a fine genuine poet. I have only respect and good wishes for you! I want to let you in on a little wisdom I acquired along my life path...it has to do with loss, and day to day waiting for change. I learned I had to make an ptimistic change in my own heartmind.l et go....love where I was. Love what I have.. You do have a father....he will always have you in his heartmind too!~ Know that~!! Jane
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Date: 3/20/2009 11:55:00 PM
HI there,im so sad for the loss of your dad,its hard loosing your dad,but you know part of him is still with you,when you're making boats he's your reminder.when you're at sea he's there again.i love boats and have love for the sea too,your dad is here in spirit and caring of you,nice poem so very nice-charma
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Date: 3/20/2009 10:28:00 PM
Priceless poetry James, I can relate. Blessings, Ron
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Date: 3/20/2009 11:29:00 AM
aww it is sad when we loose loved ones, I lost my dad 23 hours after giving birth its 13 years this august, this is a wonderful write and I too know how it feels but I hold on to Gods promise that we will see our loved ones in heaven when we are called home. I beliveve it is true Jesus came for our reconsiliation with God, God bless you from diane
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Date: 3/20/2009 8:08:00 AM
I love the concept of a "wish boat," James. Isn't it sad how these boats vanish on the horizon. I lost my father in January, so I know exactly how you feel. Creative images of youth, mixed with a powerful message.
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