Wish

Lions wish rhinos to be rats, And elephants to be cute cats…! In his wish, a tiger too, likes, A porcupine devoid of spikes…! A bear wishes, a crocodile, Doesn't devour him; but sheds a smile…! A jaguar, that, with hyenas fights, Wishes hippos don't snatch his rights…! Mares wish, beasts of household and wild, Act and react toward them, mild…! Which beast does wish, in any woods, by predators, they turn, food goods…? 23 April 2023 Writing Challenge - 'W' Words - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France Rhymes Checked At: Rhyme Zone Syllables Checked At: How Many Syllables

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/15/2023 10:24:00 AM

So very whimsical Chris! Fun! Creative. Makes me :). Kids and teens would just eat this up! Congrats and high fives for your win! Delightful! Blessings!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/30/2023 4:40:00 AM

Congratulations on this winning work in Constance's contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing with us. Sara

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/27/2023 2:23:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. A wonderful/creative write. So cute/fun. Have a great/blessed day..............

Constance La France

Date: 4/27/2023 1:42:00 PM

Christuraj, thank you for sharing your poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations !

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/26/2023 5:38:00 PM

This is a fantastic poem. Your thorough metaphor selection and perfect diction add another level of refinement to the outstanding verse you've crafted. Congrats on your win.

Christuraj Alex
Date: 4/26/2023 10:05:00 PM

Thank you very much. May God Bless You!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/23/2023 8:21:00 AM

this is so cute. I think it would do great as a nursery rhyme.

Christuraj Alex
Date: 4/23/2023 8:49:00 AM

Thank you very much. May God Bless You!