Wipeout

WIPEOUT

You  cannot imagine us today as we were  -
Almost simply a vestigial memory;  but  once
We  were numberless and roamed the landscape freely,
Harmless and beautiful creatures, each graceful,
But most impressive in herds of ten thousand,
Grazing the short  grass plains, following the seasons.
In winter moving south, returning in spring:
Shoals of us swimming the mighty rivers,
Herds of us trotting to the high pastures in late summer, 
Flights of us in the early morning mists of the 
Towering fortress  mountains which sheltered our beauty
From all enemies.   For millennia  we  lived in peace;
But the hunters came and took one of us as a trial; then another.
Then they took us in our thousands, for our skins, for our horns,
Until only a few remained, and were herded into one tight valley 
With no escape.   One by one  the weapons of the hunters
Cut us down till  only Bighorn, the last of our race, was left standing.
The chief hunter took careful aim and unleashed his weapon :
Bighorn fell dead and with him died the race of the unicorn.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
July 8, 2011 at 6:58 PM
I am seeing now that this one won in the contest. A belated congrats for this beautiful fave of mine.
Brown Avatar
May 4, 2011 at 12:22 PM
Congratulations Sydney on your win in Debbie's contest "Fantasy Land". Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
May 4, 2011 at 10:16 AM
Congratulations on the ninth place win in the contest, Sydney
Dufresne Avatar
May 4, 2011 at 5:06 AM
That's how it happened!!! I always wondered! great creative writhing Sydney. Congratulations on this fine win
Buckeridge Avatar
May 4, 2011 at 3:00 AM
So sad, enjoyed reading though. A beautiful fantasy tale :o)
Onclaud Avatar
May 3, 2011 at 10:01 PM
somber and beautiful at the same time... poetic mood and tension make this piece distinct...congrats on the shining win, syd.:) hugggs, nette
Johnson Avatar
May 3, 2011 at 5:47 PM
A sad tale not too far from the truth. congratualtions on your win. Love, Joyce
Dietrich Avatar
April 29, 2011 at 2:39 PM
WOW, the way you ended with unicorn. What great impact. For me symobolizing the end of the era of peace and enchantment. A fave for this. ONe of your best yet, Sydney.
Mclaughlin Avatar
April 29, 2011 at 12:03 PM
Lovely poem, I thought it was about the buffalo but i like it as unicorns, too
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