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Wintry Breeze

Wall of smoky snow On the entrance path of sun No light but pale sight on earth Biting cold in bone Furnace warm with fiery light Wintry breeze enjoys brashly ©Mahtab Bangalee Chattogram 10/01/2023 Sedoka poem on “WINTER” Sponsored by: Charles Messina

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/26/2023 6:25:00 AM

I wanted to drop by to say congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Thanks for sharing. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/25/2023 1:24:00 PM

I like the contrast of cold with the warm furnace. Congrats.

Mahtab Bangalee
Date: 1/25/2023 7:21:00 PM

Thanks dear Ma'm

Charles Messina

Date: 1/25/2023 5:12:00 AM

Lovely poem, Mahtab. Wonderful imagery. Congratulations on your placement in my contest! PS: I noticed that you included your name...for future reference please do not include your name...I had to let it slide this time since I didn't specify (No names) lol Nice write...stay well, Charlie

Mahtab Bangalee
Date: 1/25/2023 7:20:00 PM

Thanks for your appreciation with suggestion and shall follow accordingly

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 1/13/2023 2:56:00 PM

I love your first line, how descriptive and original, best of luck for the contest~

Mahtab Bangalee
Date: 1/25/2023 7:21:00 PM

Thanks for your appreciation