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Wintery Night

Wintery night It was a cold dark winter night, and not a person in sight All you hear is the wind rushing through the trees brushing and rattling the leaves with fury. Thunder making the mice scurry.there's not a soul in sight on this wintry night, then all the sudden all that's wrong begins to seem right, I was lost but now I am found I walk towards the light. I hear a voice calling out my name, I look into the distance and a figure appears, my eyes begin to fill with tears. Her voice is soft and faint, gets louder and louder can it be a saint. Am I dead, could this be heaven's gate, or am I hearing things have I began to faint. I long for comfort, the pain is real. Can it be over a done deal. The ground is soft, my steps are weak, my soul has reached it's peak, so cold I can't even speak. The figure is growing larger and larger, I reach out hoping to indulge her, I'm not close enough , moving is getting harder and harder. I'm almost there I can't give up now, the lord is calling me I must take my bow, I bend over and fall to my knees, asking the Lord help me please. I begin to rise, I will succeed for my lord is with me for eternity. All goes black, my eyes begin to open, the figure i was seeing is now more clear for it is my love standing there, she's had my back from the day we meet, one thing I know I could never forget, with tears rolling down her eyes I look at here and say baby I'm home I can't give up yet. By: Jordan Redfearn

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/13/2016 12:33:00 AM
Jordan, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA
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Date: 1/11/2016 6:26:00 AM
Jordan,,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs.. SKAT
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