Winter's Sheen

Frozen ponds bear winters sheen
Stark and bare, what once was green
Morning frosts bring winter's bite,
Now bitter days, and freezing nights.

The winter sun, no comfort brings
Too weak to thaw out winter's sting
Amongst this there is beauty though,
How lovely is new fallen snow.

How beautiful are icicles
Frozen cobwebs on a hedge,
Frosty patterned window panes
And snow upon the window ledge.

Who is there does not delight
In watching snowflakes fall at night,
As silently across the land
The snow queen opens up her hand.

For a time, all will be still
Captured each, by winter's chill.
Winter, she shall have her day
And for a while, she will hold sway.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Grasso Avatar
December 20, 2016 at 8:06 AM
Beatifully done, Gary! Congratulations! ...Fran
Smith Avatar
December 20, 2016 at 9:45 AM
Thank you Fran :)
Leiser Avatar
December 19, 2016 at 9:14 AM
Beautiful winter poetry, Gary...congrats on your win :)
Smith Avatar
December 20, 2016 at 9:45 AM
Thank you Laura :)
Martin Avatar
December 17, 2016 at 4:21 PM
Great winter poem! Congrats! :-)
Smith Avatar
December 17, 2016 at 4:30 PM
Thank you Mark :)
White Avatar
December 17, 2016 at 5:38 AM
Wonderful description of winter. I can see it right in front of my eyes. Congratulations :)
Smith Avatar
December 17, 2016 at 6:34 AM
Thank you Darren :)
Dietrich Avatar
December 16, 2016 at 9:08 PM
Brilliant in snow white, Gary. Excellent choice you made for the contest with this beautifully descriptive poem. Congrats to you.
Smith Avatar
December 17, 2016 at 2:52 AM
Thank you Andrea :)
Brooks Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 3:13 AM
Like the poem Gary mate.To me its what Poetry should be like
Smith Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 3:30 AM
Thank you John.
Sands Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 3:38 PM
Really nice. I enjoyed reading this one. :)
Smith Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 3:41 PM
Thank you Heidi.
Stover Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 2:57 PM
Absolutely beautiful.
Smith Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 3:14 PM
Thank you Christy.
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