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winter's last gasp

1st lover

winter’s last gasp
bone chilling loneliness ....
warm scent of your coat

2nd lover

reaching across miles
sending balmy loving thoughts
returning with spring
distance of  no consequence
cold weather unimportant





For Debbie's " Lover contest"  won no. 5

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/3/2015 1:12:00 AM
Joyce, lovely haiku, Enjoyed. SKAT
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Date: 3/14/2011 5:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Joyce in Debbie Guzzi's contest "Love Talks". Love, Carol
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Date: 3/14/2011 5:05:00 AM
I love this Joyce, congratulations on your win in Debbie's contest :) love Wilma
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Date: 3/13/2011 8:55:00 PM
Super Joyce. Warm congrats.
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Date: 3/13/2011 5:46:00 PM
Congratulations on winning in Deb's contest. With one week to go, I hope I have seen winter's last gasp.
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Date: 3/13/2011 12:59:00 PM
Beautiful job, Joyce, it is wonderful to see you at the top with this worthy honor in fifth place honorable win, Agaape, Moses
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Date: 3/13/2011 12:32:00 PM
Nice one Joyce. Congrats to you .BG
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Date: 3/13/2011 11:42:00 AM
Congratulations on the fifth place win in the contest of Debbie, Joyce
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Date: 3/12/2011 8:19:00 PM
Congrats Joyce on your big win in the contest--kashinath
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Date: 3/12/2011 7:26:00 PM
Congrats Joyce on your super win in Love Talk contest with this awesome dialogue between the lovers .. my friend.. enjoy another top ten win and your time away luv...
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Date: 3/12/2011 4:06:00 PM
Hope you see your win before you leave, Joyce. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/12/2011 3:50:00 PM
JOyce, I love this. I have to fave it! I think you said once that you did not really get into haiku writing. Well, lady you DID it here. Congratulations.
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Date: 3/9/2011 2:10:00 PM
Thanks, Joyce - and many congratulations to you too : ) Jack
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Date: 3/9/2011 11:22:00 AM
Hi Joyce, Thank you for your comments on The Edge. With all the hoopla over Catie's blog I have not been up to checking out the list of poems that are moving to the second round, but I'm sure some of yours are. Your friendship is much appreciated. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/8/2011 11:53:00 PM
yours is almost opposite of mine! (the way the second one responds!) Yes, it is so frustrating not to be able to answer. You for your computer, me for issue of TIME. I really should go off in ten min. but I really have so much to do here. DRATS
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Date: 3/8/2011 6:12:00 PM
Awesome write here,Joyce.Love it!---kashinath
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Date: 3/8/2011 5:57:00 PM
GORGEOUS! very best wishes to you in the contest good entry, joyce!!! _Miranda
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Date: 3/6/2011 2:56:00 PM
how sweeeeet, joyce! love every brocaded line,.. winning wished to you! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 3/6/2011 2:11:00 PM
Very nice contrast in thoughts between the man and woman here, Joyce. I know it's probably still cold in your area, so I'm sending some "balmy loving thoughts" your way as well as wishes for success in Deb's contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/6/2011 2:06:00 PM
Very nice~! Wonderful as always Joyce! looking forward to reading more. Take care. Dana'lynn
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