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Winter's Gods - For Contest

Winter’s Gods Numb feet slowly shuffle through light snow cold stinging hands reach out in hope clouds deny pale warmth of sun ice crystals frame pained empty eyes Hope has fled as leaves before a gale love - succumbed for lack of fire charity - ensconced in a black kettle bells calling not the faithful – but the fearful Churches feed the hungry - watered broth insufficient to the needs of broken souls shelters without stars or angels lost sheep in search of shepherds touch Winter in the heart of frozen Gods unable to undo a season’s wrath John G. Lawless 11/9/2015 submitted to – Write Me A Winter Poem – Poetry Contest sponsor – Broken Wings

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Date: 11/20/2015 3:43:00 PM
We are about to get hit with a winter storm and your poem prepares me, well done.
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Date: 11/20/2015 12:43:00 AM
Congrats on ur great win with this lovely write John!
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Date: 11/19/2015 8:18:00 PM
John, Congrats on your Winter Poem win. HUGS **SKAT**
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Date: 11/19/2015 1:41:00 PM
love your dark take on the winter theme congrats on your win John:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/12/2015 10:33:00 AM
"Shelters without stars or angels." If I read you correctly - yes, great piles of nothing but earth with no finding of the soul. Correct me if I'm wrong. daver
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Date: 11/12/2015 5:48:00 AM
This is your second winter poem that I'm reading today, John; both a delight to read....the dark gloomy atmosphere is tackled with great ability. This is winning material. #7 Regards // paul
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John Lawless
Date: 11/12/2015 8:10:00 AM
Paul, after many years of working and playing outdoors age has placed me in a "Mexican Standoff" with winter....a mutual respect with no desire for conflict.
Date: 11/11/2015 8:00:00 PM
wow, this is dark one about Winter!! It's amazing!! SEVEN (truly, the images really make an impact, John)
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John Lawless
Date: 11/11/2015 8:18:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, I've been peeking at the other side of joy lately. Thanks for the high mark

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