Winter's Garden

High shadows loom on garden walls.
They tremble in the winter’s breeze.
As from the heavens powder falls,
they mimic naked limbs of trees.

They tremble in the winter’s breeze;
forlorn, they sway as low winds moan.
They mimic naked limbs of trees.
Frail shadows now have thicker grown.

Forlorn, they sway as low winds moan.
The winds surcease, no more to blow.
Frail shadows now have thicker grown.
On arms of trees are coats of snow!

The winds surcease, no more to blow.
As from the heavens powder falls,
on arms of trees are coats of snow.
High shadows loom on garden walls.


3/16/15 
Entered Nov. 12, 2022 
for Mark Toney's 2022 Poetry Marathon Mile 20 Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Gauthier Avatar
March 28, 2018 at 7:25 AM
Back with congrats again. This is an awesome poem.
George   Avatar
January 12, 2018 at 11:39 AM
Sensational example of a Pantoum poem, Andrea. Many congrats on your win. Elaine
Gauthier Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 1:20 PM
Congrats on your winning poem, Andrea. Well done.
Canerdy Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 11:50 AM
SO beautiful, Andrea--CONGRATS!! Janice
S     Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 10:13 AM
Congratulations on your win Andrea!! What an amazing pantoum! Beautiful imagery! ~Judy
Rv Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 7:06 AM
Congrats dear Andrea on your marvellous win! Your imagery is so breathtaking I could picture every line :)
Barden Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 5:42 AM
Gorgeous Pantoum, Andrea, and a beautiful story ... congratulations on your win! Blessings, my friend! (You have such a wealth of previous material to choose from - I can only dream!) :-) <3
Gondolf Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 5:05 AM
Andrea, love the imagery in this nicely written pantoum. Congrats! John
May Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 4:15 AM
Congrats on a fine win Andrea
Poteet Avatar
February 29, 2016 at 11:57 AM
Nice work Andrea a readable piece. Pantos can sometimes be overwhelming with so much reperition. Yours is great. Loved it
Poteet Avatar
February 29, 2016 at 11:57 AM
Nice work Andrea a readable piece. Pantos can sometimes be overwhelming with so much reperition. Yours is great. Loved it
Catton Avatar
May 11, 2015 at 2:31 PM
Very nice !
La France Avatar
April 12, 2015 at 9:32 AM
Andrea, beautifully written pantoum for the contest, 7, and thanks for visiting my poem, my fat sweet purrfect cat
Hamza Avatar
April 11, 2015 at 10:38 PM
good imagery'naked limbs of trees,'trembling limbs of trees,' effective repetitions,musical words,well done Andrea
Grogan Avatar
April 9, 2015 at 9:55 AM
I love this poem. Read it and joined just so I could comment!
Duncan Avatar
March 24, 2015 at 5:48 PM
Well, this is nice. There is a breeze & cloudy today. Calif needs rain! Good luck in contest ;)
Sirak Avatar
March 21, 2015 at 8:28 AM
Even thought I am tired of winter, your beautiful words can make me long for one last snowfall.
Mohn Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 2:21 PM
This is stellar Andrea...I truly think you shine the brightest in these repeating forms...good luck in the contest
La France Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 7:33 AM
Andrea, I love your Pantoum poem even the title is poetic, the scene you paint with words makes winter seem dreamy, a well written 7, best of luck in the contest and thanks for visiting my Pantoum, it snowed . .
Carter Avatar
March 19, 2015 at 10:06 AM
I love the imagery in this poem. "On arms of trees are coats of snow" creates such a cool image. I can't pick a favorite stanza because they all are beautiful. Two thumbs up for this one!
Walker Avatar
March 19, 2015 at 6:58 AM
Hey sis, you can paint pictures in my head over and over again with your imagery.
Johnson Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 9:37 PM
Deserted desert frozen white. Awaiting spring to end its plight. Where depth of hues return it's glory. Another season to tell it's story. This form has such a trailing sense of intertwining. You do it so well. Peace. :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 7:23 PM
I LOVE THIS Andrea! I was enchanted by the imagery, by the seamless flow of your rhyme, and how you weaved your repeating lines. Excellent! 7 I must fav this one!
Austin Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 10:00 AM
Love these mysterious shadow poems. Love, daver
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 9:08 AM
the first time I read a poem like this it is from Debbie.. :) and the more am reading some examples, Im liking it more.. :)! maybe i'll try it next time.. :)! love the splendid imagery.. :) and frozen 7! //olive eloisa hugs!! :)!
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